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He's just ever so sexy
He's just so divine
He's the boy dreams are mad of
And I wanted him to be mine
I had the biggest crush on him
The first time he noticed me; I sneezed and fell
I brushed it off as coincidence
The next time he saw me, at his feet, I fell
Think I'm starting to see a pattern now
But it's just hard to tell
Everyday I would see him
And everyday, at his feet, I fell
After about two months of picking me up
He finally ask for my name
As I told him, I wodnered
Does he think I'm playing some game
What happened to me was so embarrassing
Because, at his feet, I fell, daily
I will never forget Billy Randolph
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The Boy I Fell For...Literally

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

The Boy I Fell For...Literally

He's just ever so sexy
He's just so divine
He's the boy dreams are mad of
And I wanted him to be mine
I had the biggest crush on him
The first time he noticed me; I sneezed and fell
I brushed it off as coincidence
The next time he saw me, at his feet, I fell
Think I'm starting to see a pattern now
But it's just hard to tell
Everyday I would see him
And everyday, at his feet, I fell
After about two months of picking me up
He finally ask for my name
As I told him, I wodnered
Does he think I'm playing some game
What happened to me was so embarrassing
Because, at his feet, I fell, daily
I will never forget Billy Randolph
The boy I fell for...literally

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2003-07-16 22:25:00]
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Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 11:11:44 PM AEST
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Hey chick what's up? Nothing two much over my way. I just wanted to say hello and how's life going on? Mine's alright. I like your poem.

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 11:41:24 PM AEST
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LMAO....this is so cute...
Jenni

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:36:30 AM AEST
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How did it end?

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 06:04:34 PM AEST
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He graduted high school. After that I saw him very rarely. But everytime I do see him, I still fall at him feet.

ShadowsCloud

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:43:30 PM AEST
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i want to know too, how did it end? good write Crow

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:10:59 AM AEST
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For those of you who are wondering how this ended. He graduated high school the year before me. After that I very rarely saw him. But every time I do see him I still fall at his feet. Maybe one day I will get a date out of this.

ShadowsCloud

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:25:58 AM AEST
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This was great I really enjoyed it. I smiled all the way though. Kimmie_mac

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 01:06:56 PM AEST
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Ouch Candice,
This sounds awfully painful, you'll wear ya knees out as quick as lights if you ain't carefull when really trying to avoid catching someones eye like this. Or do girls do this sort of thing for a reason?
I really don't know!
Funny write though Candice, it made me giggle.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 11:47:01 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you enjoyed reading this. I can not speak for other guys, but personally I try not to do this type of thing when trying to catch a guys eye. These things just sort of happen to me.

ShadowsCloud

Re: The Boy I Fell For...Literally (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 04:00:16 AM AEST
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Ooops, I meant that I can't speak for other girls.

ShadowsCloud

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