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Array ( [sid] => 20523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Godsend [time] => 2003-07-16 14:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this a long time ago for my friend, Jen. We are no longer friends, but I still thank god that she was a part of my life for the short period of time that she was.... [bodytext] => I had thought I'd never make it
I was sure I'd hit rock bottom.
I had said that it was pointless.
I had felt my time was done.
I believed that I was all alone.
I had thought that no one cared.
I gave up all faith and all hope,
In the man they said was up there.
But then a hand appeared
Reaching out for me.
Out of the darkness
Wanting me to be.
She made my sadness happy and
She made my darkness bright.
And she couldn't have picked a better time
To walk in to my life.
Yes, an angel came,
In the form of a friend.
And nothing's been the same
Since my little godsend. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Crys [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Godsend

Contributed by Crys on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I had thought I'd never make it
I was sure I'd hit rock bottom.
I had said that it was pointless.
I had felt my time was done.
I believed that I was all alone.
I had thought that no one cared.
I gave up all faith and all hope,
In the man they said was up there.
But then a hand appeared
Reaching out for me.
Out of the darkness
Wanting me to be.
She made my sadness happy and
She made my darkness bright.
And she couldn't have picked a better time
To walk in to my life.
Yes, an angel came,
In the form of a friend.
And nothing's been the same
Since my little godsend.

Copyright © Crys ... [ 2003-07-16 14:35:00]
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Re: Godsend (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:51:32 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful... and godsends are pretty nifty too!! thanks for sharing it, it's a good write! kudos! ;0)
-daniel

Re: Godsend (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 06:10:37 PM AEST
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Such a lovely write. Well done!
Saira

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