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Array ( [sid] => 20496 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Rise Free [time] => 2003-07-16 02:05:00 [hometext] => a young girl shuts the world out, and looks inside. the small spark thats left turns to fire. [bodytext] => Her thoughts to tears
a night born cold
protected thoughts she holds within.

The timid mind will not reveal
a darkened corner, the look inside.

The smallest spark the fire grows
deep within, attending hope
and love in dreams.

Teathers break, the beauty known
Rise Free. Crow
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Rise Free

Contributed by crow on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Her thoughts to tears
a night born cold
protected thoughts she holds within.

The timid mind will not reveal
a darkened corner, the look inside.

The smallest spark the fire grows
deep within, attending hope
and love in dreams.

Teathers break, the beauty known
Rise Free. Crow




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Re: Rise Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:30:01 AM AEST
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Really beautiful, Crow..
Jenni


Re: Rise Free (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:41:05 AM AEST
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yes, i think the same thoughts sometimes.


Re: Rise Free (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 04:29:07 AM AEST
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First of all..I love the title :)
Its a scary place,the mind.But when we venture there and stay for a while..things are made seem,lighter,less worriesome.You have captured the freedom well.
**ok ok...so maybe not my mind lol.**


Re: Rise Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:19:10 AM AEST
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very well done


Re: Rise Free (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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Crow this is lovely...so simple yet so complex as our minds can very well be...simply adored this read. Thank you


Re: Rise Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:54:14 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write!
Saira




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