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In my heart your love shines.
Beatific smile, like aurora, brightens up my day,
Genial embrace showers affection on my way.

You, full of joie de vivre, double joys of mine,
Make me chirpy and sing happy rhymes.
In my dusky despair, come as an elysian light
Lift me up, empathize, and the like.

You firmly stand by me in needy times,
Wisdom so immense, coruscates in your eyes.
Found the love of a sister, mother and friend in you,
My inspiration, a woman of the utmost virtue.

You, my precious sister – irreplaceable,
A part of my life – inseparable.
Glorious symbol of beauteous sisterhood,
Blessed chapter of my life’s book.
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YOU

Contributed by Saira on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You, a gift from God, O so divine!
In my heart your love shines.
Beatific smile, like aurora, brightens up my day,
Genial embrace showers affection on my way.

You, full of joie de vivre, double joys of mine,
Make me chirpy and sing happy rhymes.
In my dusky despair, come as an elysian light
Lift me up, empathize, and the like.

You firmly stand by me in needy times,
Wisdom so immense, coruscates in your eyes.
Found the love of a sister, mother and friend in you,
My inspiration, a woman of the utmost virtue.

You, my precious sister – irreplaceable,
A part of my life – inseparable.
Glorious symbol of beauteous sisterhood,
Blessed chapter of my life’s book.

Copyright Â© Saira ... [ 2003-07-16 01:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:42:40 AM AEST
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its nice to love people.

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 04:11:29 AM AEST
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beautiful tribute, very pretty poem. Crow

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 04:19:29 AM AEST
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Excellent language, beautiful imagery..well written..the charecteristics of your sister are also well portrayed..Sairaji..Aadaab.. venkat

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:01:42 AM AEST
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And feels more nicer when those lovable people returns your love with love.
Thanks.

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:04:23 AM AEST
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Thank you my friend.

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:08:30 AM AEST
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Thank you very much brother, Aadaab :o)

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:20:48 AM AEST
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wonderful
Shari

Re: YOU (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 06:35:21 PM AEST
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Well... U r poem makes my most Undying, Impossible wish again trouble me and i.e.

I Wish I had an Elder Sister too..!!!

Superbly Written!!

Zee

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:04:17 AM AEST
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Thanks Shari!

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:13:26 AM AEST
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You can find an affection of an elder sister in your mother :o)
Thanks Zee for your kind remarks.
Saira

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by gohar on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:52:05 AM AEST
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Dear Saira,

This is a most beautiful poem. It beautifys your
decisive love and admiration. It is exceptionally a great poem. Congratulations.

App ka.

Ashraf Gohar Goreja

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:54:11 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for your kind remarks.

Re: YOU (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:02:03 PM AEST
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Hi Sis,
It's simply great. I feel the same for YOU. You've done a great job. Love you.
Your Sis Saima.

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:36:57 AM AEST
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Love ya too Appi! :o)

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by gohar on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:25:51 PM AEST
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Hello Saima,

You are very lucky to have such a tallented
sister. It is a nice poem.

Ashraf Gogar Goreja

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