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Bash your face in the ground
Suffer like i suffered for you
Then maybe forgiveness will be found

Slit your wrists nightly
Cry yourself to sleep
Tell me you cant live without me
And let me watch you weep

Pierce your eye with a needle
Tear out your heart one piece at a time
Bow down and let me control you
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For me

Contributed by deadly_blaZe on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Stick your head in a blender
Bash your face in the ground
Suffer like i suffered for you
Then maybe forgiveness will be found

Slit your wrists nightly
Cry yourself to sleep
Tell me you cant live without me
And let me watch you weep

Pierce your eye with a needle
Tear out your heart one piece at a time
Bow down and let me control you
Then forever youll be mine

Copyright © deadly_blaZe ... [ 2003-07-14 23:25:00]
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Re: For me (User Rating: 1 )
by ericool_dude on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:43:06 PM AEST
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Nicely written, however I would like to see the last line changed. Rather than "do this and I will forgive you", It would be nicer as "you can do this, but you will never be mine."

Re: For me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:13:44 AM AEST
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great venting, liked this very much
Shari

Re: For me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:35:20 AM AEST
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emtionaly charged write.Well done
michelle

Re: For me (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 08:39:47 AM AEST
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Great poem ... good expression ... Jan

Re: For me (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:47:27 PM AEST
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excellent... if only others could receive as much agony as they give. great write.

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