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Array ( [sid] => 20385 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => And the Winner is... [time] => 2003-07-14 03:05:00 [hometext] => Umm....just read the poem and comment [bodytext] => I should win an Academy Award
Because my performance is so believable
I can make you think that I am honestly happy
Deep down I don't even know what happiness feels like
But that's okay, because my life isn't real
You don't believe I can actually feel
And that's okay, because that's what I want you to think
I want you to think I'm made of sugar and spice and all things nice
Not for you to know that you're the reason I slice
And rip open my veins, letting the blood paint my arms
What portrait would you like me to paint tonight?
I swirl the blood on the canvas of my wrists
Hoping you'll like the picture I paint
But my love, don't criticize me,
I never said I was a saint
I don't want to hide the tears, but I don't want to be exposed
I'll just wait to tell you how I feel until the scars have closed
So you won't think I'm a freak just screaming for attention
Even though deep down you know I'm silent
But I'll just sit here waiting,
For when she breaks your heart
Then I'll tell you how I love you
But once again you'll say no
Once again you'll rip my veins apart
And once again I'll win some meaningless award
For my performance debut
To hide it all back inside
I'll once again take a vow
So answer me one thing,
Is my smile convincing now? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TeenageEmoGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
And the Winner is...

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I should win an Academy Award
Because my performance is so believable
I can make you think that I am honestly happy
Deep down I don't even know what happiness feels like
But that's okay, because my life isn't real
You don't believe I can actually feel
And that's okay, because that's what I want you to think
I want you to think I'm made of sugar and spice and all things nice
Not for you to know that you're the reason I slice
And rip open my veins, letting the blood paint my arms
What portrait would you like me to paint tonight?
I swirl the blood on the canvas of my wrists
Hoping you'll like the picture I paint
But my love, don't criticize me,
I never said I was a saint
I don't want to hide the tears, but I don't want to be exposed
I'll just wait to tell you how I feel until the scars have closed
So you won't think I'm a freak just screaming for attention
Even though deep down you know I'm silent
But I'll just sit here waiting,
For when she breaks your heart
Then I'll tell you how I love you
But once again you'll say no
Once again you'll rip my veins apart
And once again I'll win some meaningless award
For my performance debut
To hide it all back inside
I'll once again take a vow
So answer me one thing,
Is my smile convincing now?




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-07-14 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: And the Winner is... (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM AEST
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I am the first to leave a message on here. I feel do like this and I think youre letting strong feels out. I feel youre reaching out to a person and theyre to blind to see that you want them or you love them. Don't away a walk and don't give in to much.


Re: And the Winner is... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:17:15 PM AEST
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You should win an award for your writing! I love it! I really do! And you should also win an award for sticking in there and being so strong. Look after yourslef.
(p.s. i miss talking to u on aim, we will have to catch up onedays)




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