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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Army Wife
[time] => 2003-07-14 02:05:00
[hometext] => Thank you all for your comments the past three years. But I must go now I love you all, and will miss you very much.
[bodytext] => The good Lord was creating a model for the Army wife,
He was exhusted, and deep into his sixth day of overtime,
When an angel came to him and said, you seem to be having trouble,
Is this really that important, your so tried your seeing double,
He gave the angel a harsh look, have you seen the specks on this order,
She must be completely indenpented, and make twenty dollars out of a quarter,
She must process the ablity of both father and mother,
She must be able to heal herself, keep herself warm when there's no one to hold her
She must be the perfect hostess for 4 or 40 on a hour's notice,
She must handle every emergence imagenable, without the aid of a manual,
She must handle the homefront in the absents of her man, and she's got to have six hands,
Six hands procialmed the angel, your putting to much on her plate, she won't make it through the first date,
I'll give her an unusally large heart, so it can swell in her her husband's achviments,
Withstand the pain and seperation the army brings with it,
The ablity to carry on, even if she's pregnate, and has the flu,
And big enough, that even if she's sick, she can still say I love you,
The angel said, she looks weak, I'm scard she'll break,
The Lord smile, she has the stregth of the lion, she won't let anything stand in her way,
She must be able to take the ridicual of protesters, and not lose her cool,
She must be able to take the harsh reality of her husbanb's life being through,
The angel ran her fingers down the model's cheek, oh no she said, she has a leak,
The Lord glared at the angel, that's not a leak, that's a tear,
A tear my Lord, this is heaven what's it doing here,
The Lord sighed, it's for pride, love, pain and heartbreak,
Oh Lord your a genius, she will be perfect, and the angel left,
The Lord looked puzzled, ran his fingers through his long white hair,
That's strange, I never put it there.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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[acomm] => 0
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[ratings] => 2
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Army Wife
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The good Lord was creating a model for the Army wife,
He was exhusted, and deep into his sixth day of overtime,
When an angel came to him and said, you seem to be having trouble,
Is this really that important, your so tried your seeing double,
He gave the angel a harsh look, have you seen the specks on this order,
She must be completely indenpented, and make twenty dollars out of a quarter,
She must process the ablity of both father and mother,
She must be able to heal herself, keep herself warm when there's no one to hold her
She must be the perfect hostess for 4 or 40 on a hour's notice,
She must handle every emergence imagenable, without the aid of a manual,
She must handle the homefront in the absents of her man, and she's got to have six hands,
Six hands procialmed the angel, your putting to much on her plate, she won't make it through the first date,
I'll give her an unusally large heart, so it can swell in her her husband's achviments,
Withstand the pain and seperation the army brings with it,
The ablity to carry on, even if she's pregnate, and has the flu,
And big enough, that even if she's sick, she can still say I love you,
The angel said, she looks weak, I'm scard she'll break,
The Lord smile, she has the stregth of the lion, she won't let anything stand in her way,
She must be able to take the ridicual of protesters, and not lose her cool,
She must be able to take the harsh reality of her husbanb's life being through,
The angel ran her fingers down the model's cheek, oh no she said, she has a leak,
The Lord glared at the angel, that's not a leak, that's a tear,
A tear my Lord, this is heaven what's it doing here,
The Lord sighed, it's for pride, love, pain and heartbreak,
Oh Lord your a genius, she will be perfect, and the angel left,
The Lord looked puzzled, ran his fingers through his long white hair,
That's strange, I never put it there.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Army Wife
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by Kimmie_mac on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:38:10 AM AEST
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Amazing. Really great reading. It was a treat.
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Re: Army Wife
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:14:15 AM AEST
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excellent, very good write...you will be missed very much...safe journey
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Re: Army Wife
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:47:23 AM AEST
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Phantom this is beautiful!! I missed something somewhere your leaving???? Now Im so sad!!
michelle
Even though Iv known you for a short time Iv enjoyed your poetry and your friendship blessing to you are your family my friend! |
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Re: Army Wife
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:21:27 PM AEST
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Oh this is such an amazing write and even tho I haven't been around here for long, I have fallen in love with your writing. You will be missed greatly here. Safe journies my friend.
stacey |
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Re: Army Wife
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 01:14:35 PM AEST
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After I read I couldn't walk so lemme talk
the poem is powerful, charged with passion.
In being demanding of our beloved we make a choice
I call that pride over reason but that's my reason.
(pride, love, pain, heartbreak) I understand
but I challenge pride as friend or foe, and the pain
there's enough of that in the World, who needs more?).
V |
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Re: Army Wife
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:58:20 PM AEST
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| matt, this is very beautiful....but where and why are you going!!?? i will miss you very very much, we will keep the door open always for you my dear friend!! big hugs and love nessa |
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Re: Army Wife
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:17:43 PM AEST
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Imagine my horror when I read your note!! I've been off the site for 2-3 weeks and now I see this?? You'd better take good care of yourself, my friend..and hurry back home to those who love you....
Exceptional write...(bar a few spelling mistakes..) lol..but you know me well enuff now...to know I won't let those go un-noticed... lol
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Re: Army Wife
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:58:52 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful tribute, i thought you were coming back! the days were short. Crow |
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Re: Army Wife
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 01:58:30 AM AEST
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What a terrific write even though its painfully true!
You both choosed this kind of journey & God knew you could handle it!
Theres not many that can! Just like a truckers wife!LOL! Peace to you both & good luck! Christina |
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Re: Army Wife
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 03:48:53 AM AEST
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The Lord glared at the angel, that's not a leak, that's a tear,
A tear my Lord, this is heaven what's it doing here,
"The Lord sighed, it's for pride, love, pain and heartbreak, Oh Lord your a genius, she will be perfect, and the angel left, The Lord looked puzzled, ran his fingers through his long white hair,That's strange, I never put it there."
A wonderful write.. unforgetable lines..
venkat
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