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Array ( [sid] => 20376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Moment of Despair [time] => 2003-07-13 22:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everything is failing,
everything is falling,
everything sucks,
everything is messed up.

I hate myself more than
you could ever know,
I want to end so much,
I want to end it all,
I just want to get rid of myself.

I am messing it all up,
I feel hated by the ones
who love me most,
I feel like I do nothing
for them,
I feel like I am worthless,
I'm nothing,
I'm nothing,
I'm nothing.

All my intentions are ruined,
no one takes them
for what they are,
I'm stupid,
I'm worthless,
I'm a waste of time.

Why is anyone around me?
Why does anyone love me?
I'm just messing it all up.

I'm just destroying what
I hold dear,
I'm just ruining everything,
ruining it all,
screwing everything up.

What's my purpose?
Why do I hurt everyone
I love so dear?

Why can't I just go away?
Would they really even miss me?

I know they would....
I know it...
but why?
Why do I even matter,
when I feel this down? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Vampy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

A Moment of Despair

Contributed by Vampy on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Everything is failing,
everything is falling,
everything sucks,
everything is messed up.

I hate myself more than
you could ever know,
I want to end so much,
I want to end it all,
I just want to get rid of myself.

I am messing it all up,
I feel hated by the ones
who love me most,
I feel like I do nothing
for them,
I feel like I am worthless,
I'm nothing,
I'm nothing,
I'm nothing.

All my intentions are ruined,
no one takes them
for what they are,
I'm stupid,
I'm worthless,
I'm a waste of time.

Why is anyone around me?
Why does anyone love me?
I'm just messing it all up.

I'm just destroying what
I hold dear,
I'm just ruining everything,
ruining it all,
screwing everything up.

What's my purpose?
Why do I hurt everyone
I love so dear?

Why can't I just go away?
Would they really even miss me?

I know they would....
I know it...
but why?
Why do I even matter,
when I feel this down?

Copyright © Vampy ... [ 2003-07-13 22:35:00]
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Re: A Moment of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:56:12 PM AEST
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I can relate with you on this one strongly.

Its a great write....try telling yourself your something, because you are, everyone is special in there own way.....You would be missed surely by your loved ones and many here at ypdc.....if you ever want to talk just PM me...

Your Friend Always

- Becca

Re: A Moment of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:33:23 PM AEST
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i hope you get past this depression, your a very good writer, and i enjoy the work. Crow

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