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[title] => The Secret That You Are
[time] => 2003-07-13 12:35:00
[hometext] => This is just a 'love' (let's say lust) letter. I wrote it after a late night black/white movie.
[bodytext] => Your scent is of the most fertile ones. And your touch burns through my hand, although I know every single one will. This is just a reaction of despair; of the absence of satisfaction of lustful needs. I'd bleed for you, for a drunk night with you. In my blurry world you become everything I long for. So does everyone else. But my sober daylight disdains your presence. You understood the secret you had to be. Secretly you would rub your palm of lifelines against mine and our worlds got strangled. There's no need to explore them. The carnal desires are overwhelming, so there's no need for love. You will disgust me by the time the darkest hour before dawn has enchanted me. Until then I will covet your regard and after that you'll have to live with yourself.
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The Secret That You Are
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Chenobi
on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
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Your scent is of the most fertile ones. And your touch burns through my hand, although I know every single one will. This is just a reaction of despair; of the absence of satisfaction of lustful needs. I'd bleed for you, for a drunk night with you. In my blurry world you become everything I long for. So does everyone else. But my sober daylight disdains your presence. You understood the secret you had to be. Secretly you would rub your palm of lifelines against mine and our worlds got strangled. There's no need to explore them. The carnal desires are overwhelming, so there's no need for love. You will disgust me by the time the darkest hour before dawn has enchanted me. Until then I will covet your regard and after that you'll have to live with yourself.
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2003-07-13 12:35:00]
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Re: The Secret That You Are
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by vincy on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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( tarantula ) does that ring a bell?
it is like a black queen spider
but this one is cool,
doesn't devour you after sex
just lets you be in a 'off with you' way,
the language is rich, erotic and mystique
and like a stream it flows. |
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Re: The Secret That You Are
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:10:58 PM AEST
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| said the spider to the fly! |
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