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Array ( [sid] => 20317 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dances In The Moonlight [time] => 2003-07-12 19:35:00 [hometext] => thanx to my twin Lisa (blackfire9786) for helping me name this one. love ya sis! [bodytext] => In the iridescent moonlight
They take my hand
The soft, enchanting melodies
Blur what I think I understand

Each taking turns
They twirl me around
I’m like a ballerina
In a black satin gown

They whisper things of long ago
As we dance around the starlight
They remind of times lost in my memories
As they sing their sweet song of my demise

They wrap me in their trance
As they fill my head with sorrow
They know the nightmares they’ve caused me
No sleep for me tomorrow

But all this they do not care
They just want to hear me scream, see me fight
As I dance with the demons of my past
In the iridescent moonlight

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Dances In The Moonlight

Contributed by wild_heart_of_fire on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In the iridescent moonlight
They take my hand
The soft, enchanting melodies
Blur what I think I understand

Each taking turns
They twirl me around
I’m like a ballerina
In a black satin gown

They whisper things of long ago
As we dance around the starlight
They remind of times lost in my memories
As they sing their sweet song of my demise

They wrap me in their trance
As they fill my head with sorrow
They know the nightmares they’ve caused me
No sleep for me tomorrow

But all this they do not care
They just want to hear me scream, see me fight
As I dance with the demons of my past
In the iridescent moonlight

Copyright Â© wild_heart_of_fire ... [ 2003-07-12 19:35:00]
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Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 09:42:07 PM AEST
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I have never read pain expressed in such an eloquent manner before this is a wonderful write

Shari

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:05:35 PM AEST
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You held my eyes with the imagery and stirred my soul with your words..Excellent!!

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:25:27 PM AEST
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goodness! this really works. very good work
i like this Crow

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:27:08 AM AEST
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excellent!! hugs n' love nessa

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Dr_Calm on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:59:00 AM AEST
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Really excellent! A beautiful write!

Jeffrey

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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Aahhh this is such a wonderful write ... Jan

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:44:29 PM AEST
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this is amazing and sad and beautiful at the same time...i love it...

Re: Dances In The Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:44:23 PM AEST
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geez riki~can u never do anything wrong? Once again, a beautiful write, much luv twin!
Lisa

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