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Array ( [sid] => 20305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => In the Closet [time] => 2003-07-12 13:35:00 [hometext] => When A child screams out loud we come running to their sides, but sometimes their screams aren't so obvious, sometimes you have to look hard, and sometimes what you find is a dark hole in their soul, sometimes, we miss the hurt and pain they are suffering. Sometimes, someone else is causing their pain and suffering. [bodytext] => Their is a dark hole in there

I
Fell
Into
It

But I've covered it up
Hidden it from the world

He's in there

I
Saw
Him
There

But he didn't let me out
He got me with great ease

That door is normally locked

I
Think
He
Has
The
Key

He used to take me down there

He
Hurt
Me
Down
There

But no one ever saw it
The lights were always dimmed

No one heard me scream

I
SCREAMED
AND
SCREAMED

But silent screams aren't heard
You have to look for their faces

Mommy never saw what they looked like

She
Never
Went
Down
There

No one ever found the hole
I had to keep them safe

I couldn't let him get them

I
Was
The
Sacrifice

There's a light in my closet too
There's a rope, to turn it on

He
Turns
It
Off

He gets me in the dark
Then he keeps me there

He
Hurts
Me
There

Sometimes I think I can get that key
I think i can reach the rope

Just
A
Little
Further

He can't get me in the light

He says I make him happy
But the darkness makes me sad

Get
The
Rope

Get
The
Rope

Then I found it, I have the key
I can reach the rope!

I
See
The
Light

Mommy said there were no monsters
She said not to be afraid

I
Can
Touch
Her
Tears

She's scared; She sees the hole
She can see my screams

She
Can't
See
Me

She sees the dark hole in my closet
She believes in monsters now

She
Left
Him

She keeps the lights on

He
Can't
Get
me [comments] => 6 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SeXyDrAgOn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
In the Closet

Contributed by SeXyDrAgOn on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Their is a dark hole in there

I
Fell
Into
It

But I've covered it up
Hidden it from the world

He's in there

I
Saw
Him
There

But he didn't let me out
He got me with great ease

That door is normally locked

I
Think
He
Has
The
Key

He used to take me down there

He
Hurt
Me
Down
There

But no one ever saw it
The lights were always dimmed

No one heard me scream

I
SCREAMED
AND
SCREAMED

But silent screams aren't heard
You have to look for their faces

Mommy never saw what they looked like

She
Never
Went
Down
There

No one ever found the hole
I had to keep them safe

I couldn't let him get them

I
Was
The
Sacrifice

There's a light in my closet too
There's a rope, to turn it on

He
Turns
It
Off

He gets me in the dark
Then he keeps me there

He
Hurts
Me
There

Sometimes I think I can get that key
I think i can reach the rope

Just
A
Little
Further

He can't get me in the light

He says I make him happy
But the darkness makes me sad

Get
The
Rope

Get
The
Rope

Then I found it, I have the key
I can reach the rope!

I
See
The
Light

Mommy said there were no monsters
She said not to be afraid

I
Can
Touch
Her
Tears

She's scared; She sees the hole
She can see my screams

She
Can't
See
Me

She sees the dark hole in my closet
She believes in monsters now

She
Left
Him

She keeps the lights on

He
Can't
Get
me




Copyright © SeXyDrAgOn ... [ 2003-07-12 13:35:00]
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Re: In the Closet (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 01:47:01 PM AEST
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ooooooo...what a powerful poem! so sad! hits close to home. you wrote it wonderfully. i like the style. you have wonderful talent. thank you for this poem.

Always,

~*riki lynn*~


Re: In the Closet (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:05:05 PM AEST
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very good write, sent chills, something parents have to look for ..
Shari


Re: In the Closet (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:07:40 AM AEST
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you have a way with wors and your poetry it very touching! it's very cmplicated and unique you are a very talented writer! really great form to write it in great choice!


Re: In the Closet (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:29:14 PM AEST
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I like this and it's really good


Re: In the Closet (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:05:14 AM AEST
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I can tell you are a creative person
the format, presentation of this poem
caught my eye, you're on to something.
I would dig deeper, explore this style.
there's merit here.


Re: In the Closet (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:36:24 AM AEST
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oh my god
i um dont know what to say
this is so real
its like u were there like watching or something listing to the voices in my head
'cept u can write them down
whereas i cant yet
coz i still cant reach the rope
turn on the light




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