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Pour from the seams
Of the corner of her eyes
She's not sad when she cries
No one as perfect as she
Cries out of agony
Only after slumber
Only after dreams of wonder
And fantasies that set her free
From this world of mine and yours
Where our feet are forced to floors
To be controlled, overworked and slowly killed
Only in her dreams will she be thrilled
So when you are wondering why her tears flow
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Drops of Dreams

Contributed by lostinlimbo on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Drops of dreams
Pour from the seams
Of the corner of her eyes
She's not sad when she cries
No one as perfect as she
Cries out of agony
Only after slumber
Only after dreams of wonder
And fantasies that set her free
From this world of mine and yours
Where our feet are forced to floors
To be controlled, overworked and slowly killed
Only in her dreams will she be thrilled
So when you are wondering why her tears flow
They are drops of dreams from the night before

Copyright © lostinlimbo ... [ 2003-07-11 16:35:00]
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Re: Drops of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:44:32 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Lostinlimbo...
Jenni

Re: Drops of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 08:33:33 PM AEST
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very interesting...i like it..good write!

~*riki lynn*~

Re: Drops of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 10:50:44 PM AEST
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great very intriguing
Shari

Re: Drops of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 04:46:30 AM AEST
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an enchanting write, love your title and espescially your end line:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Drops of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 12:40:50 PM AEST
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This is one of those poems that makes you think, makes you wonder and then... at the end it all comes into sense. I'd have to say this poem is absolutely amazing. You picked your words ever so carefully and it all came together.

-Amy

Re: Drops of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 07:20:38 AM AEST
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This poem is very well written. Ill be back to read it again.

Cheers
#13

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