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Array ( [sid] => 20243 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A lost cause [time] => 2003-07-11 11:05:00 [hometext] => (Shelby) we need to see that we need to let her be. [bodytext] => With your help I now can see what needs done
just for me so Im bringing myself out of the fog.
For the other problem of mutual interest we have
been having I feel she is a lost cause.
We have our own things going on and after watching her from close by she has lost it this time.
You care for her as I do and this we both know.
Yet love surpassed will not last and she needs
to do these things on her own.
Im backing out and I hope that you do to because
she knows we will always stand by her steadfast and true.
She plays you as she does me only difference is
your now gone and you cant see.
I see the things that you nolonger can and I hope that you understand Iv got to worry more about me
and I think that you should just do the same.
Years go by and nothing is changed and she needs to get it together and play her own game.
Friends are fleeting and she is not pleasing
for me to be around anymore.
I know that she has broken you and hurt you to a core.
You still have me and we have eachother and we can sustain the blow.
We can work on things going on with us and have
that lifelong friendship so pure.
I love ya Michelle [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 32 [informant] => desertwispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
A lost cause

Contributed by desertwispers on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



With your help I now can see what needs done
just for me so Im bringing myself out of the fog.
For the other problem of mutual interest we have
been having I feel she is a lost cause.
We have our own things going on and after watching her from close by she has lost it this time.
You care for her as I do and this we both know.
Yet love surpassed will not last and she needs
to do these things on her own.
Im backing out and I hope that you do to because
she knows we will always stand by her steadfast and true.
She plays you as she does me only difference is
your now gone and you cant see.
I see the things that you nolonger can and I hope that you understand Iv got to worry more about me
and I think that you should just do the same.
Years go by and nothing is changed and she needs to get it together and play her own game.
Friends are fleeting and she is not pleasing
for me to be around anymore.
I know that she has broken you and hurt you to a core.
You still have me and we have eachother and we can sustain the blow.
We can work on things going on with us and have
that lifelong friendship so pure.
I love ya Michelle




Copyright © desertwispers ... [ 2003-07-11 11:05:00]
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Re: A lost cause (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 11:13:48 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem, so heartfelt and full of strong emotions. I applaud you on this one.


Re: A lost cause (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 03:10:42 PM AEST
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excellent write

Shari


Re: A lost cause (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 06:13:29 PM AEST
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a good write,and wisdom in the work. Crow




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