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Array ( [sid] => 20227 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Gone Phishing (an acid trip) [time] => 2003-07-10 12:05:00 [hometext] => brace yourselves people, this is going to suck [bodytext] => If I take the time, to get much older,
Life would sure protest.
My only friend is the remote control,
As long as the battery's fresh.

I take a stand, and make a living,
Then I'll taste the wreck.
I ***** away my spot in heaven,
With a southern dialect.

Get to know her, is a metaphore, for,
slamming doors, on a trailer porch,
And I'll, just ignore, if she says she's bored.
'Cause I'd rather be swinging from a barbed wire cord,
Or impale myself on an A.I.D.'s laced sword.
Because less is more, and I'm picking my sore,
Our love's washed up on a Wednesday shore.

I'll shave away, my razor burn,
Left foot first, I'll never learn.
Throw a bible to the fire, and heal my faith,
I bribe myself, and still won't bathe.
Snorting heart attacks; drug symphony,
Exploit ideas of sympathy.
Take a closer look, you fail to see,
My series of serious mockery.

Missile floatin' through the bedroom door,
Hair clogged my vacuum, last resort.
Computer miss-fired; Fed-Ex retorts,
Diet Slice and now my breath is orange.

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Gone Phishing (an acid trip)

Contributed by papajfat on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

If I take the time, to get much older,
Life would sure protest.
My only friend is the remote control,
As long as the battery's fresh.

I take a stand, and make a living,
Then I'll taste the wreck.
I ***** away my spot in heaven,
With a southern dialect.

Get to know her, is a metaphore, for,
slamming doors, on a trailer porch,
And I'll, just ignore, if she says she's bored.
'Cause I'd rather be swinging from a barbed wire cord,
Or impale myself on an A.I.D.'s laced sword.
Because less is more, and I'm picking my sore,
Our love's washed up on a Wednesday shore.

I'll shave away, my razor burn,
Left foot first, I'll never learn.
Throw a bible to the fire, and heal my faith,
I bribe myself, and still won't bathe.
Snorting heart attacks; drug symphony,
Exploit ideas of sympathy.
Take a closer look, you fail to see,
My series of serious mockery.

Missile floatin' through the bedroom door,
Hair clogged my vacuum, last resort.
Computer miss-fired; Fed-Ex retorts,
Diet Slice and now my breath is orange.

Copyright © papajfat ... [ 2003-07-10 12:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:27:35 PM AEST
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*Smiles* I like the flow to this. It's got a nice beat. Makes you want to keep reading.... even after the poem is over. Man, you got some tripped out idea's though.

*J*

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:27:49 PM AEST
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*Smiles* I like the flow to this. It's got a nice beat. Makes you want to keep reading.... even after the poem is over. Man, you got some tripped out idea's though.

*J*

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:30:56 PM AEST
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I caught a glimpse of that floatin' Tomahawk
as it came out'a yr bedroom window
some acid you must'a dropped..."bam bada boom!"
so long as you come out intact from the other side.
( I have learned to take life protests ever so lightly
in my later years. ) http://www.erowid.org/index.shtml

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:26:51 PM AEST
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very good...i love it...

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by papajfat on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 03:59:31 PM AEST
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I can't believe they censored out the word *****. That pisses me off.

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by papajfat on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 04:01:14 PM AEST
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Damn it they did it again. the word was P*ssed. With an i.

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 05:15:03 PM AEST
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I loved the flow of the poem it had a nice little rythm going lol. Good write. `day`

Re: Gone Phishing (an acid trip) (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 09:52:17 AM AEST
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stupid suck....are you aids patient..

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