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Array ( [sid] => 20127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Watch You [time] => 2003-07-08 11:05:00 [hometext] => For my boys,I watch you grow up & it kills me to see my babies growing up!This is for you Brandon & Justin. [bodytext] => I watch you grow,
Day by day,
I wonder if you know,
that mommy prays,
I watch you move,
with every step,
will I be able to prove,
the promises I kept,
I watch your eyes,
but at a glance,
do you realize,
I see you dance,
I watch your face change,
through the years,
It seems strange,
when I wipe your tears,
I hear you speak,
listining to every word,
even when my hearings weak,
I'll remember what I've heard,
Your growing up so fast,
It brings tears to my eyes,
those memories wont last,
they will soon just slip by,
It wont be long, when I grasp your hand,
they'll be bigger than mine,
then I'll be watching a man,
and the memories will be in my mind.

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 5 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )

I Watch You

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

I watch you grow,
Day by day,
I wonder if you know,
that mommy prays,
I watch you move,
with every step,
will I be able to prove,
the promises I kept,
I watch your eyes,
but at a glance,
do you realize,
I see you dance,
I watch your face change,
through the years,
It seems strange,
when I wipe your tears,
I hear you speak,
listining to every word,
even when my hearings weak,
I'll remember what I've heard,
Your growing up so fast,
It brings tears to my eyes,
those memories wont last,
they will soon just slip by,
It wont be long, when I grasp your hand,
they'll be bigger than mine,
then I'll be watching a man,
and the memories will be in my mind.

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-07-08 11:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Watch You (User Rating: 1 )
by soul_je on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:23:23 AM AEST
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You wrote here a wonderfully excellent touching poem. A mother's love is always forever true and ceaseless. Your children should be very proud to have a mother like you. I truly admire you.

Re: I Watch You (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:52:31 AM AEST
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wonderful
shari

Re: I Watch You (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:43:36 PM AEST
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An excellent write! Your kids are lucky to have such a caring and loving mother like you.
Saira

Re: I Watch You (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:11:59 AM AEST
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Wow, christina.. this is excellent.. venkat

Re: I Watch You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:32:04 AM AEST
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beautiful my friend
michelle

Re: I Watch You (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:18:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful

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