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Array ( [sid] => 20080 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => tears to end time to mend [time] => 2003-07-07 13:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Gun is in the closet bullets are nearby.
Maybe the thought of murder had several
times crossed her mind.
If he was out of this picture nomore would he
punish and hurt despair and tears would be
lost in time with death she would nolonger flirt.
Walking on that tight rope the line so close to cross and thoughts and words mixed in emotions would surely in time be lost.
If the trigger should be pulled and the end to the means begins then what would be the end result
a life time for her locked up in prison??
Without reason it made no sense she would be punished either way, kill him to end the pain or the life time of being locked away.
A chill ran up the back of her spine and rose up to her head which would be better out of the two of them one living and the other dead??
No freedom to be seen from pain and decay.
So she wont get the gun instead live and just rot away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 13 [informant] => desertwispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

tears to end time to mend

Contributed by desertwispers on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Gun is in the closet bullets are nearby.
Maybe the thought of murder had several
times crossed her mind.
If he was out of this picture nomore would he
punish and hurt despair and tears would be
lost in time with death she would nolonger flirt.
Walking on that tight rope the line so close to cross and thoughts and words mixed in emotions would surely in time be lost.
If the trigger should be pulled and the end to the means begins then what would be the end result
a life time for her locked up in prison??
Without reason it made no sense she would be punished either way, kill him to end the pain or the life time of being locked away.
A chill ran up the back of her spine and rose up to her head which would be better out of the two of them one living and the other dead??
No freedom to be seen from pain and decay.
So she wont get the gun instead live and just rot away.

Copyright © desertwispers ... [ 2003-07-07 13:05:00]
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Re: tears to end time to mend (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:32:55 PM AEST
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this was a very well written and strong write...but what of the other alternative to leave

Shari

Re: tears to end time to mend (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 08:57:28 PM AEST
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there is nothing in this world more important than you, nothing! you come first, if your not o.k. nothing in the world will be. you are the only one that end fear and hate. you have to step-up, or step away. there are people that help. be safe Crow

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