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Array ( [sid] => 20073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Shadow play [time] => 2003-07-07 09:35:00 [hometext] => an obscure experience [bodytext] => Shapes and shadows
all dark and gray
came out of their windows
and started to pray
as I floated along
in my little spaceship
thinking to myself
all time long
have I done something wrong?.
Which button must I press
to relieve my muscles
from this stress
which hand should I use
to stop my hair fall.
Yellow people in street corners
asked me which way to go
and one by one I answered them
" there's nowhere to go ".
When I realised I was on Earth
some strange feeling came up to me
I uncurled myself all over this place
and let the grey sleep by me
let the earth be a part of me
and me be a part of this & all. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 49 [informant] => vincy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Shadow play

Contributed by vincy on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Shapes and shadows
all dark and gray
came out of their windows
and started to pray
as I floated along
in my little spaceship
thinking to myself
all time long
have I done something wrong?.
Which button must I press
to relieve my muscles
from this stress
which hand should I use
to stop my hair fall.
Yellow people in street corners
asked me which way to go
and one by one I answered them
" there's nowhere to go ".
When I realised I was on Earth
some strange feeling came up to me
I uncurled myself all over this place
and let the grey sleep by me
let the earth be a part of me
and me be a part of this & all.

Copyright Â© vincy ... [ 2003-07-07 09:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shadow play (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 10:25:45 AM AEST
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You never fail, in a mystical way,
making one think of a better day...

Re: Shadow play (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:06:01 PM AEST
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Your poems relax me for some reason
Thanks
Shari

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