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[aid] => Mick
[title] => stop making me suffer
[time] => 2003-07-07 04:05:00
[hometext] => hi hope you like this poetry and then i promise i will make a comment for your poetrys too thanck you again
[bodytext] => stop making me suffer i wanted us to be together i looked at the miror i see you reflection you didn't maked any attention now not before i was only asking for more grabing you screaming at the door feeling the wave this feeling i have allways save you pushed me away dumping me at this way crushed and crumbled every day when i see you truying another way as hard as i truyed i still pay please don't go bring back your flow you allready know i do love you so it burns from all the wayes when i prayes till the moment we grab arms in this war dropping bombs please i wanted this more then anything that smile you should bring to this ship we traveled burn away and crumbled this may want to end now but for ever it will stay don't ask how
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stop making me suffer
Contributed by
wassim
on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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stop making me suffer i wanted us to be together i looked at the miror i see you reflection you didn't maked any attention now not before i was only asking for more grabing you screaming at the door feeling the wave this feeling i have allways save you pushed me away dumping me at this way crushed and crumbled every day when i see you truying another way as hard as i truyed i still pay please don't go bring back your flow you allready know i do love you so it burns from all the wayes when i prayes till the moment we grab arms in this war dropping bombs please i wanted this more then anything that smile you should bring to this ship we traveled burn away and crumbled this may want to end now but for ever it will stay don't ask how
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Re: stop making me suffer
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by Xx31187xX on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:28:16 AM AEST
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| i dont quite get it but then i do if that makes any sense it all just flow together, you cant really tell one thought from the next. idk if it's meant to be that way or not. but i still really like it |
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Re: stop making me suffer
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:26:50 AM AEST
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kind of jumbled thoughts run together but still an overall strong write
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Re: stop making me suffer
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by squeesh on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:56:03 PM AEST
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hey
good job
I could really relate to that
keep up the good work
~Squeesh |
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Re: stop making me suffer
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 07:37:43 AM AEST
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It's a very nice write. Keep them coming!
Saira |
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Re: stop making me suffer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 02:17:13 PM AEST
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what a f**king poetry!!
you make me s**k!!!!
tfeh !
yekhfike min bein el chou3ara2!!!! |
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