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Im more in love and deeply touched with every passing day
Your sadness it caresses,slow dances with my soul
Then leaves me captivated with no sense of self control
So much the perfect lover,easing desire's fears
And too my tempting lover,you forever hold my tears
Attracted to the loneliness,the passion of your pain
Your sorrow is my lover,my tears,the velvet rain
You seduce me as no other,tease and tempt my skin
As you cast upon my heart,your sorrow there within
So gentle with each kiss,my feelings ebb and flow
Your sorrow is my lover,your the walls of my chateau
Surrounding me,protecting,holding all you feel
Your sorrow is my lover and before your pain I kneel
Into my heart like a lover,your sorrow finds its way
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Your Sorrow,My Lover...

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Into my heart like a lover,your sorrow finds its way
Im more in love and deeply touched with every passing day
Your sadness it caresses,slow dances with my soul
Then leaves me captivated with no sense of self control
So much the perfect lover,easing desire's fears
And too my tempting lover,you forever hold my tears
Attracted to the loneliness,the passion of your pain
Your sorrow is my lover,my tears,the velvet rain
You seduce me as no other,tease and tempt my skin
As you cast upon my heart,your sorrow there within
So gentle with each kiss,my feelings ebb and flow
Your sorrow is my lover,your the walls of my chateau
Surrounding me,protecting,holding all you feel
Your sorrow is my lover and before your pain I kneel
Into my heart like a lover,your sorrow finds its way
Im more in love and deeply touched with every passing day

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-07-06 16:05:00]
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Re: Your Sorrow,My Lover... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:12:49 PM AEST
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great
Shari

Re: Your Sorrow,My Lover... (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:25:09 PM AEST
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It's like a musical etude by Chopin
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The concept of sorrow increasing love
is interesting to me,
I'm the sorriest creature on this earth
Loving me should easy be.

Re: Your Sorrow,My Lover... (User Rating: 1 )
by dafremen on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:49:24 PM AEST
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Nice verse. Very nice perspective. A little longer in the oven would've baked it golden brown. Regardless, it was quite delicious.

Re: Your Sorrow,My Lover... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:10:56 PM AEST
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elagantly beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Your Sorrow,My Lover... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:13:11 PM AEST
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Aww its wonderful...i personally think it is already golden as the words shine out with sure beauty

Re: Your Sorrow,My Lover... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:14:50 PM AEST
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opps sure = pure

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