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Array ( [sid] => 20034 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Day Will Be Reborn [time] => 2003-07-06 15:05:00 [hometext] => Written under a haze of pain & medication. Please be forgiving. [bodytext] => Cast adrift, like ashes on the wind
Stumbling blindly through the mist
Two worlds collide, startled eyes meet
As sweet as a honeyed kiss

Like one possessed, I extend my hand
Soft eyes have penetrated my defenses
I see in you salvation from myself
And this realization assaults my senses

You feel in me the emotional bedlam
That your simple acceptance of me does create
Patiently, gently, you soothe my fears
As you wait for this chaos to abate

The smoldering of your eyes ignites feelings long buried
You appease the longings of my soul
No longer lost, the day will be reborn
Together, we will become whole.

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The Day Will Be Reborn

Contributed by tanna on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Cast adrift, like ashes on the wind
Stumbling blindly through the mist
Two worlds collide, startled eyes meet
As sweet as a honeyed kiss

Like one possessed, I extend my hand
Soft eyes have penetrated my defenses
I see in you salvation from myself
And this realization assaults my senses

You feel in me the emotional bedlam
That your simple acceptance of me does create
Patiently, gently, you soothe my fears
As you wait for this chaos to abate

The smoldering of your eyes ignites feelings long buried
You appease the longings of my soul
No longer lost, the day will be reborn
Together, we will become whole.

Copyright © tanna ... [ 2003-07-06 15:05:00]
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Re: The Day Will Be Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:29:38 PM AEST
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Tanna this is great.
michelle

Re: The Day Will Be Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:33:39 PM AEST
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Very good write! Keep them comming.
Saira

Re: The Day Will Be Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:51:02 PM AEST
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very good work, just a beautiful poem. Crow

Re: The Day Will Be Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:14:36 AM AEST
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A wonderful write Tanna ...(and I hope you are feeling well again) ... Jan

Re: The Day Will Be Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:33:35 AM AEST
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Wonderful..Tanna, this is so sweet.... venkat

Re: The Day Will Be Reborn (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:48:24 AM AEST
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G'day Tanna,
This is a wonderful write, it touched my soul and made me aware of how much I've missed you.
Hope all is well,
Hugz + xoxoxo
Fwog

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