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Array ( [sid] => 20033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => -To Spare You- [time] => 2003-07-06 14:35:00 [hometext] => This is a fairly old one. Its a song come poem. You choose. I think it is one of my more selfish ones but again you decide [bodytext] => Im falling
Spiralling out of control
Smashing into things
Destroying all I touch.

If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.

I’m in control of my own destination
Fail or succeed
Its all up to me
I only hope that I don’t
Drag you down with me.

If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.

Crashing back down to earth
Knife in my hand
Trying to end all
But is it what I want?

If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.

Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt
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-To Spare You-

Contributed by gem48 on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Im falling
Spiralling out of control
Smashing into things
Destroying all I touch.

If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.

I’m in control of my own destination
Fail or succeed
Its all up to me
I only hope that I don’t
Drag you down with me.

If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.

Crashing back down to earth
Knife in my hand
Trying to end all
But is it what I want?

If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.

Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt

Copyright Â© gem48 ... [ 2003-07-06 14:35:00]
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Re: -To Spare You- (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:20:48 PM AEST
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Wow! It's so beautiful ... full of emotions. More look like a song to me. I loved it. Good work!
Saira

Re: -To Spare You- (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:52:29 PM AEST
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these words would make great lyrics - they're powerful and emotive but with all the realism that makes them easy to relate to. the repetition is really effective. i know this feeling well - wanting to get away from someone in case you hurt them while you're self destructing. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x

Re: -To Spare You- (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:03:18 PM AEST
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painfully sad but well written just the smae
michelle

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