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Array ( [sid] => 20016 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => This Façade is all I know [time] => 2003-07-06 08:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'll take your breath she said
As her crimson lips touched my head
I can't help to think there must be a better scheme for my day
And if not will every hour of my life proceed this way
Should I lead her on until we die
Or just let her go besides I'm due for a cry
She gave up her life to spend it with me
I should at least pretend to be happy
It was just a casual fling
In merely a second awoke
Hearing the church bells ring
I only wish I could choke
Or drown the stagnant water in which I bathe
If not my soul then her's I'd save
For my illness there is no cure
Losing the love for a love so pure
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This Façade is all I know

Contributed by eyesrustedshut on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'll take your breath she said
As her crimson lips touched my head
I can't help to think there must be a better scheme for my day
And if not will every hour of my life proceed this way
Should I lead her on until we die
Or just let her go besides I'm due for a cry
She gave up her life to spend it with me
I should at least pretend to be happy
It was just a casual fling
In merely a second awoke
Hearing the church bells ring
I only wish I could choke
Or drown the stagnant water in which I bathe
If not my soul then her's I'd save
For my illness there is no cure
Losing the love for a love so pure

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Re: This Façade is all I know (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:16:37 AM AEST
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Does not that person have the right to be set free to find someone who really loves them?

Shari

Re: This Façade is all I know (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:18:49 AM AEST
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Well its obvious you care and also feel a lil guilty..All thats left now is to do the right thing..And only in your heart can you find the courage.So if you love her,care for her...set her free :)..I wish you all the best...

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