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I can't recall the last time you kissed me
It's been so long since your breath has caressed my skin
And your velvet whispers have faded.....
Leaving soft imprints on my mind
Like faded ink on paper

So warm your embrace,although it has loosened
With closed eyes,I try and recapture closer moments
Yet the miles of old seem further,greater than before
And your touch has drifted.....
Leaving a cold spot on my body
Like winter delivering its kiss

The gentle sighs you painted upon my lips
Still linger and escape my mouth,an orchestra of emotion
Symphonic bliss to dream of you,feel you in my heart
And the melody will remain...
Leaving me energised and fresh
Like the way you bring to life,my soul [comments] => 4 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Music Of You...

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As wonderful and captivating as I know it was,
I can't recall the last time you kissed me
It's been so long since your breath has caressed my skin
And your velvet whispers have faded.....
Leaving soft imprints on my mind
Like faded ink on paper

So warm your embrace,although it has loosened
With closed eyes,I try and recapture closer moments
Yet the miles of old seem further,greater than before
And your touch has drifted.....
Leaving a cold spot on my body
Like winter delivering its kiss

The gentle sighs you painted upon my lips
Still linger and escape my mouth,an orchestra of emotion
Symphonic bliss to dream of you,feel you in my heart
And the melody will remain...
Leaving me energised and fresh
Like the way you bring to life,my soul

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-07-05 19:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Music Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:43:58 PM AEST
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a rhapsody of words floating across the page
well written

Shari

Re: The Music Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM AEST
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you paint beautiful pictures, you know that.
just a treat to read. Crow

a friend and i sat down with guitars and put a little music to "lost in silence" hope you don`t mind, just a few lines.your words are great!
made the girls cry. asked me where i got it!
they know i can`t write that sensitive.
i think thats the word that expresses my
thoughts best. Crow

Re: The Music Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:24:09 PM AEST
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dearest sharon this is a most beautiful poem, wow, stunning and lovely, great line; "Yet the miles of old seem further" this whole write is so excellent, i love it, hugs n' love nessa

Re: The Music Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:33:58 AM AEST
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Oh how I love this! One of your few poems without rhyme that I have read and it is beautiful... Jan

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