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Array ( [sid] => 19980 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => night sky high [time] => 2003-07-05 14:35:00 [hometext] => captured moments [bodytext] => A falling star

shooting past

undetected

so far.

Can you catch

with your eyes

the tail end

of the dust

particles

spreading

backwards in time?

Over there

the remnants

of the once supernova

a wild comet

destination oblivion

shooting fast

shooting past

your weary eyes.

Catch... a glance

of light

in your sight

press the shutter

freeze the frame

hold this moment

seal the time

before it fades.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 53 [informant] => vincy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => scifi )

night sky high

Contributed by vincy on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: scifi

A falling star

shooting past

undetected

so far.

Can you catch

with your eyes

the tail end

of the dust

particles

spreading

backwards in time?

Over there

the remnants

of the once supernova

a wild comet

destination oblivion

shooting fast

shooting past

your weary eyes.

Catch... a glance

of light

in your sight

press the shutter

freeze the frame

hold this moment

seal the time

before it fades.

Copyright © vincy ... [ 2003-07-05 14:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: night sky high (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 06:54:10 PM AEST
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beautiful:)

Re: night sky high (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:03:47 PM AEST
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great write

Shari

Re: night sky high (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:43:06 AM AEST
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beautiful poem I to love to watch the night sky
michelle

Re: night sky high (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 10:45:14 AM AEST
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I love the thought of time standing still...
-----------------------------------------
How can you take a picture of time,
No less, set the action as you did in rhyme,
with earth spinning fast
and spinning sublime
Everything's gone with a flip of a dime...

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