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Array ( [sid] => 19965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Barrier [time] => 2003-07-05 07:05:00 [hometext] => This is about people who settle for someone for reasons other than love [bodytext] => Love on my doorstep will not be far away
Down the street on the left
The woman of my dreams
The woman I love
She doesn’t know the trouble
I’ve been to be close

Loved for reasons now loved sewn
Lost in the cosmic unknown
The reason for the loving face
The atmosphere cannot debate
Glowing attraction to the source of life
Wishing to be closer
Knowing not to touch
Too sacred to be breathed
To be kept in a glowing luminescent seam

Joined with wish and dream and fame
Waiting for the girl to tame
Another love taken her away
One not of destiny nor fate
Growing in the earth of rock
Not flourishing in the soil of affection
Force and oblige used in love
Invalidation of truth
fallacy of life

As these streams come from my head I see her down the street
The future is not in my control I say
But it is if I love her now
Before the truth precedes her somehow
Faith in wrong place
Be devoted to another life
Be joined to an unwanted soul
Mates in heaven
Why not here?
Holding back is something, for us to break free
Is to embrace truth
Hope lost of body kept in the spirit
It is to unleash the mind, soul and heart, forever


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Barrier

Contributed by niceguysfinishlast on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Love on my doorstep will not be far away
Down the street on the left
The woman of my dreams
The woman I love
She doesn’t know the trouble
I’ve been to be close

Loved for reasons now loved sewn
Lost in the cosmic unknown
The reason for the loving face
The atmosphere cannot debate
Glowing attraction to the source of life
Wishing to be closer
Knowing not to touch
Too sacred to be breathed
To be kept in a glowing luminescent seam

Joined with wish and dream and fame
Waiting for the girl to tame
Another love taken her away
One not of destiny nor fate
Growing in the earth of rock
Not flourishing in the soil of affection
Force and oblige used in love
Invalidation of truth
fallacy of life

As these streams come from my head I see her down the street
The future is not in my control I say
But it is if I love her now
Before the truth precedes her somehow
Faith in wrong place
Be devoted to another life
Be joined to an unwanted soul
Mates in heaven
Why not here?
Holding back is something, for us to break free
Is to embrace truth
Hope lost of body kept in the spirit
It is to unleash the mind, soul and heart, forever






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Re: Barrier (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:21:01 AM AEST
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your poetry flows, it is vivid and a joy to read, looking forward to more
Shari


Re: Barrier (User Rating: 1 )
by ziggy on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 10:14:34 AM AEST
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been there before... good write.


Re: Barrier (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 06:28:54 AM AEST
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This was very good and very poetic although I didn't really understand what you were writing about.

Bobo (Joel)




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