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Lives in a balance overweighed by fate
The kiss of death so sweet and tender
Four young bodies' spirits surrender
What thoughts passed through each mind
Were prayers uttered? Was there any time?
The media hurries to get the story
No accolades presented, this day no glory
Broken glass mixed with April showers and a kiss from death
Memories of smiles and love are all that is left
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Ninety In a Thirty-Five

Contributed by eyesrustedshut on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Unaware such tragedy awaits
Lives in a balance overweighed by fate
The kiss of death so sweet and tender
Four young bodies' spirits surrender
What thoughts passed through each mind
Were prayers uttered? Was there any time?
The media hurries to get the story
No accolades presented, this day no glory
Broken glass mixed with April showers and a kiss from death
Memories of smiles and love are all that is left

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Re: Ninety In a Thirty-Five (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:01:47 PM AEST
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Whether we know the victims or not,it still affects us in some way...(((huggers))) You have captured the scene and the loss so well here..last two lines...WOW!!!

Re: Ninety In a Thirty-Five (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:22:20 PM AEST
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Well written you have much talent,
Shari

Re: Ninety In a Thirty-Five (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 12:55:43 AM AEST
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very, very good, i see some of these tragic
events with the work i do. its so hard to lose friends in this manner. even as a stranger when i see the loss, it tears into my heart as well. good work Crow

Re: Ninety In a Thirty-Five (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:01:49 AM AEST
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you bring a sense of tragedy and loss to this poem but at the same time, the imagery and phrases used are beautiful and poetic. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x

Re: Ninety In a Thirty-Five (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:11:12 PM AEST
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A lost life is tragic but even more so when so young and by an accident. Excellent writting. Kimmie_mac

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