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Array ( [sid] => 19863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Torn off buds. a very short poem... (written 1975). [time] => 2003-07-03 06:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
Content to tear off rose buds
then crush them in his hands,
Just so...
he crushed my heart and soul...

( Poor wretch, whom understands. )

Footnote:
This poem ,in past, has been misunderstood so here is the true meaning of it:

This poem was written in the late 70's about a very controlling person who in fact stifled my creativity and crushed my spirit by not allowing me...to be...me.
My rose buds were simply my ideas ,my expressions,which he crushed constantly.
Needless to add....that person has been out of my life for many long years now...
(thank God!) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Kay-P-M-Devenish [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Torn off buds. a very short poem... (written 1975).

Contributed by Kay-P-M-Devenish on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Content to tear off rose buds
then crush them in his hands,
Just so...
he crushed my heart and soul...

( Poor wretch, whom understands. )

Footnote:
This poem ,in past, has been misunderstood so here is the true meaning of it:

This poem was written in the late 70's about a very controlling person who in fact stifled my creativity and crushed my spirit by not allowing me...to be...me.
My rose buds were simply my ideas ,my expressions,which he crushed constantly.
Needless to add....that person has been out of my life for many long years now...
(thank God!)

Copyright © Kay-P-M-Devenish ... [ 2003-07-03 06:35:00]
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Re: Torn off buds. a very short poem... (written 1975). (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 08:37:00 AM AEST
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Oh, how I understand this with perfect clarity ... so I guess I am a "poor wretch, whom understands" ... :))) Jan

Re: Torn off buds. a very short poem... (written 1975). (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:58:43 AM AEST
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ditto what Jan said... excellent little poem... simply stated... powerfully said... blessings...

Re: Torn off buds. a very short poem... (written 1975). (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 07:47:10 PM AEST
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Hi Kay...very deep write.... Good to see you here again...
Your island friend,
Jenni

Re: Torn off buds. a very short poem... (written 1975). (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:59:39 AM AEST
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i love this poem
short but sweet

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