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Array ( [sid] => 19824 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => tuesday [time] => 2003-07-02 12:35:00 [hometext] => sometimes, the subway is a surprisingly inspiring place... [bodytext] => By chance,
we met on a train.
A massive lady
was resting
most of her weight
on my smallest toe.
The scruffily bearded man
from the corner
shot a yellow-toothed grin
my way,
and the blast of dirty cigarettes,
and regurgitated alcohol
assailed my nostrils.
I discreetly turned away,
and glanced
at the assaulted toe instead.
You
were smirking impishly;
those thoughtful, dark eyes
fixated
on the passing scenes
of life,
the secret world
of every day;
mesmerized,
not by my beauty,
not by the perfection
of our surroundings,
only by the unfolding
of another Tuesday morning. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => me [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

tuesday

Contributed by me on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

By chance,
we met on a train.
A massive lady
was resting
most of her weight
on my smallest toe.
The scruffily bearded man
from the corner
shot a yellow-toothed grin
my way,
and the blast of dirty cigarettes,
and regurgitated alcohol
assailed my nostrils.
I discreetly turned away,
and glanced
at the assaulted toe instead.
You
were smirking impishly;
those thoughtful, dark eyes
fixated
on the passing scenes
of life,
the secret world
of every day;
mesmerized,
not by my beauty,
not by the perfection
of our surroundings,
only by the unfolding
of another Tuesday morning.

Copyright © me ... [ 2003-07-02 12:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: tuesday (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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Anonymos*

I think you have beautifully captured a moment in time... i feel your emotions and feel as though i am right there.

i aslo enjoy the fact that it's so simplistic and practical... day to day. i think that u've captured something which most people experience on a daily bases.. down to a slow motion time shot.

nice!

Re: tuesday (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:51:36 PM AEST
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What a great theme...This is the kind of theme that could be the basis for 10 more poems........If you sell the theme, I'll buy it...

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