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Array ( [sid] => 19816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Little gurlz R made of... [time] => 2003-07-02 09:35:00 [hometext] => i don't know it's just somfin i came up with...my life... [bodytext] => Little gurlz are made of
hate and
pain and
rainy days and
thunderous ways

But little gurlz lose a lot to

lost loves
leads to
lost tears
leads to
lack of blood in later years

and little gurlz want

spiked heals
and rainbow belts
little cute tops and
black nails
hopes and dreams
crushed by mothers means

what’s best for me’s
not what I want
and what I want I get
but what I get’s never
what I want
and what I give is never right
and what I take
I steal
like the stars light
in the midnight sky
I stole
and now it’s mine
but there’s plenty to go round
so take a star and hold it tight
make a wish
say a prayer
and tell God good night
because ever star in the sky’s
a dragons eye
because we believe in what isn’t there
that’s how we stay in relationships that aren’t real

my life tied up in few words
make believe imaginations
and voices I hear

I’ve came along way
since I was there
but now I’m gone
I wish I was somewhere [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Percursors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Little gurlz R made of...

Contributed by Percursors on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Little gurlz are made of
hate and
pain and
rainy days and
thunderous ways

But little gurlz lose a lot to

lost loves
leads to
lost tears
leads to
lack of blood in later years

and little gurlz want

spiked heals
and rainbow belts
little cute tops and
black nails
hopes and dreams
crushed by mothers means

what’s best for me’s
not what I want
and what I want I get
but what I get’s never
what I want
and what I give is never right
and what I take
I steal
like the stars light
in the midnight sky
I stole
and now it’s mine
but there’s plenty to go round
so take a star and hold it tight
make a wish
say a prayer
and tell God good night
because ever star in the sky’s
a dragons eye
because we believe in what isn’t there
that’s how we stay in relationships that aren’t real

my life tied up in few words
make believe imaginations
and voices I hear

I’ve came along way
since I was there
but now I’m gone
I wish I was somewhere

Copyright Â© Percursors ... [ 2003-07-02 09:35:00]
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Re: Little gurlz R made of... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 10:25:28 AM AEST
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This is a good poem, I really liked it and it is very true aswell. Good work,
luv stacey

Re: Little gurlz R made of... (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 10:35:53 AM AEST
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You've done such a good job, it almost
make me want to be one of the gurlz

Re: Little gurlz R made of... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 04:25:05 PM AEST
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This is a true statement of facts.Nice job of verbalizing what us girls are made of. And break from.
Angel always........godspeed..joni

Re: Little gurlz R made of... (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 02:22:48 AM AEST
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Absolutely love the first verse..The whole write says so much :)..Nice one.Thanks for commenting on my poem...I nevber knew you were here *embarassed* Now that I do..Ill keep an eye out ;)

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