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Array ( [sid] => 19787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Nothing Lasts Forever [time] => 2003-07-01 19:05:00 [hometext] => what you think is real in life, will lead you the wrong way...please leave comments. [bodytext] => So you sit in tears for someone you couldn't love the right way.
Just wishing and fighting the pain away.
No matter what you said, you couldn't make the feelings stay.
Forced a lie that made it all o.k.

Lived with all the feelings you were sure were real.
But you were playing with a fate that you couldn't seal.
Only when you were challenged, did you even begin to feel.
You created the gaping wounds that await to heal.

So you blame yourself for what you know you did.
How were you suppose to know, you're only a kid.
Now choking you, the fears you thought you hid.
Everything pours out, all the hates and annoyances of which you wish you were rid.

It was simply complicated all along.
Just said what you felt and it was taken completely wrong.
Can't believe it took so long.
But all those things, you had to prolong.

Couldn't tell the truth to the one who cared most about you.
Sleeping at night, knowing there's nothing you can do.
You turn around and so it's through.
Saying the feelings were never really true.

But it was all true inside.
You were too scared, you lied.
But everything, you could not hide.
Now all that is good, has gone and died.

Nothing lasts forever.
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Nothing Lasts Forever

Contributed by MX on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So you sit in tears for someone you couldn't love the right way.
Just wishing and fighting the pain away.
No matter what you said, you couldn't make the feelings stay.
Forced a lie that made it all o.k.

Lived with all the feelings you were sure were real.
But you were playing with a fate that you couldn't seal.
Only when you were challenged, did you even begin to feel.
You created the gaping wounds that await to heal.

So you blame yourself for what you know you did.
How were you suppose to know, you're only a kid.
Now choking you, the fears you thought you hid.
Everything pours out, all the hates and annoyances of which you wish you were rid.

It was simply complicated all along.
Just said what you felt and it was taken completely wrong.
Can't believe it took so long.
But all those things, you had to prolong.

Couldn't tell the truth to the one who cared most about you.
Sleeping at night, knowing there's nothing you can do.
You turn around and so it's through.
Saying the feelings were never really true.

But it was all true inside.
You were too scared, you lied.
But everything, you could not hide.
Now all that is good, has gone and died.

Nothing lasts forever.

Copyright © MX ... [ 2003-07-01 19:05:00]
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Re: Nothing Lasts Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 09:05:03 PM AEST
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good write
shari

Re: Nothing Lasts Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:02:57 PM AEST
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Very very true nothing lasts forever. But how long is one persons forever? A day a night a year or two. Everyone has ther own demons to conquer and there own forever to do it in. I loved this write very very touching.
Always
Amy

Re: Nothing Lasts Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Fairy on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:04:58 PM AEST
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wow.. I felt like you were reading this to me.. It's scary how I related to that so well.. keep up the wonderful work...

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