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Array ( [sid] => 19772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Broken Dreams [time] => 2003-07-01 12:05:00 [hometext] => How would you say it? [bodytext] => I don’t want to give you pain or
Hurt your heart too.
Or make you feel your life’s been a waste
Because of any hell I put you through.

You say I love you and
in your heart it’s true.
But you just don’t remember the
heartache you put me through.
The tears I cried the yelling and abuse I heard
I just don’t understand how you think that’s absurd.

To you it’s all over and it doesn’t happen much anymore,
You justify it will a shrug, it was nothing, no less no more.
But emotions aren’t that strong to survive years of this,
How do I find the words to tell you my love no longer exists?

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lovingangel4u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Broken Dreams

Contributed by lovingangel4u on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I don’t want to give you pain or
Hurt your heart too.
Or make you feel your life’s been a waste
Because of any hell I put you through.

You say I love you and
in your heart it’s true.
But you just don’t remember the
heartache you put me through.
The tears I cried the yelling and abuse I heard
I just don’t understand how you think that’s absurd.

To you it’s all over and it doesn’t happen much anymore,
You justify it will a shrug, it was nothing, no less no more.
But emotions aren’t that strong to survive years of this,
How do I find the words to tell you my love no longer exists?

Copyright Â© lovingangel4u ... [ 2003-07-01 12:05:00]
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Re: Broken Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:06:17 PM AEST
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Your poem tells it all
no reason to bawl
seems that you're right
in ending the fight
anyway, it's your call

Re: Broken Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:56:09 PM AEST
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good write
Shari

Re: Broken Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:54:59 PM AEST
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Well you found the words to write this poem
which answers the question which you pose
at the end of the poem.

Re: Broken Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by outsider on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:48:16 AM AEST
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You write such excellent poetry, and this one is no different. It is an extremely powerful write. The only difference with this one is I wish you hadnt been in the situation where you had to write this poem

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