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Array ( [sid] => 19768 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Go And Live Your Life! [time] => 2003-07-01 10:05:00 [hometext] => Re-post written last summer. I was just bored when I wrote this so I apologise if I offend anyone [bodytext] => Correct me if I'm wrong
'cos maybe its just me
but have you ever noticed
most people online are lonely
Hmmn, I wonder why?
Maybe its 'cos they're here
wasting their life online
How many hours a day
do you spend here and why?
This may come as a shock to you
but just beyond your door
is real water, trees and people too!
Damn, don't you get it, don't you see?
Breathe in that fresh air!
Stop moping about online!
Get your a** off that chair
and go and live your life! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 46 [informant] => Debz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )

Go And Live Your Life!

Contributed by Debz on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: didactic

Correct me if I'm wrong
'cos maybe its just me
but have you ever noticed
most people online are lonely
Hmmn, I wonder why?
Maybe its 'cos they're here
wasting their life online
How many hours a day
do you spend here and why?
This may come as a shock to you
but just beyond your door
is real water, trees and people too!
Damn, don't you get it, don't you see?
Breathe in that fresh air!
Stop moping about online!
Get your a** off that chair
and go and live your life!

Copyright © Debz ... [ 2003-07-01 10:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Go And Live Your Life! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 03:25:38 PM AEST
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GREATTTTT!!! I love it!!!...i'm gonna get my a** off this chair and go live life.

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