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Hope
Contributed by
Saira
on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Solid darkness, nothingness inside,
Ocean of tears, you endeavor to hide.
Shutting mind on hopes for the morrow,
Brooding over melancholic sorrows.
Been assiduous to achieve lofty goals,
Fate decreed, got aching spears on the soul.
Misfortune befell, always a good reason behind,
Entrance after each exit, I’m here to remind.
O my Angel! Do not let your hope die away,
Soon there will be fireflies illuminating your way,
You will again know happiness one fine day,
For you, to dear God Almighty, I pray.
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-06-29 06:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sapphire on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:06:06 AM AEST (User
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Lovely. A candle is lit for your friend. |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:06:19 AM AEST (User
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i will add your friend to my prayer list, lovely write
Shari |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:50:01 AM AEST (User
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I too have lit a candle....Seem to be filling my home with them these days.. :(..Yet with every flickering of the candlelight...there is the flicker of hope :)...You and your friend are in my prayers(((hugs))) |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 09:08:30 AM AEST (User
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Thank you very much Sapphire. I really appreciate that! |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 09:10:37 AM AEST (User
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So nice of you Shari. Thanks a lot! |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 09:14:58 AM AEST (User
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So nice of you LovingWhispers. That means a lot to me and my friend. Thanks for being there. |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 03:46:30 PM AEST (User
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a masterpiece i would say. ur friend must have some hope now.
my prayers r with ur friend hope every thing turns out well
from u know who!
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:42:38 PM AEST (User
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May hope, light and love abound in the heart of your friend! My prayers are with him as I sit and light a candle and pray for his blessed soul. He has a great friend in you!!!
Beautiful write!
Angel always..godspeed!!! joni
{{{{{prudent&friend}}}}}}} |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST (User
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That's sooo nice of you. Thank you very much my friend for your prayers and kind remarks. |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 06:08:09 AM AEST (User
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Saira.. this has a beautiful touch of spirituality also..it is mind refreshing.. venkat |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by gohar on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:20:54 PM AEST (User
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Saira, This is a most beautiful poem. It reminds me Milton. Really a great write.
May God Bless you.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Gohar
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:48:38 PM AEST (User
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I'm glad you liked it. Thank you my friend for your lovely remarks! |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:51:32 PM AEST (User
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Thank you very much my friend. God bless you too! |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:58:07 AM AEST (User
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I'm having problems with my traditional beliefs at the moment but that does not stop me from sharing your sentiments and wishing your friend a speedy recovery. Your poem shows friendship at it's best. I'll settle for just that anyday |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 12:17:48 PM AEST (User
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Thank you very much my friend for your kind remarks as always.
I hope you get everything what your heart desires for! Blessings...:-)
Saira |
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