|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
acid tears
Contributed by
broken
on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
acid tears burned to my face
unable to wash away
painfully etched scars
beautifully placed
stained rusting red
blade cut too far
my personal requiem
sung on skin
acid tears marred
Copyright ©
broken
... [
2003-06-29 01:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: acid tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:52:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good imagery. The pain is visible. Well typed!! |
|
|
Re: acid tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 02:17:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is really strong, and you've written it out very well.
charlotte x_x_x
|
|
|
Re: acid tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by broken on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 04:17:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| thanx. glad you liked. |
|
|
Re: acid tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by broken on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 04:18:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| thanx. just wrote it....no thought. best way. 3> |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
