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Array ( [sid] => 19696 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Mr. Wrong or Right [time] => 2003-06-28 20:35:00 [hometext] => Listen to your friends when they try to warn you about the person you like. You may be blinded, I know I was. [bodytext] => When I first met you
I felt no attraction
No expression
No satisfaction
I never thought that it would someday be
Now and maybe always you and me

I didn’t know what to do
To be with you or leave
So I decided that we’re meant to be
And you said you liked me

Now we are together
Forever maybe
But I still don’t know
If we are meant to be

People tell me you’re not that great
They want me to get a clue
They say you’re just a perv
Who likes to smoke and chew

I try to take your side
Every chance I get
I might lose friends along the way
But we’ll be together yet

People say you get a crush
On every girl you meet
Whether she’s freaking hot
Or just extremely sweet

I hope I’m not just another girl
For you to use then leave
I pray to God you’re not like that
You just seem too sweet
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Mr. Wrong or Right

Contributed by Forever_Dream on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When I first met you
I felt no attraction
No expression
No satisfaction
I never thought that it would someday be
Now and maybe always you and me

I didn’t know what to do
To be with you or leave
So I decided that we’re meant to be
And you said you liked me

Now we are together
Forever maybe
But I still don’t know
If we are meant to be

People tell me you’re not that great
They want me to get a clue
They say you’re just a perv
Who likes to smoke and chew

I try to take your side
Every chance I get
I might lose friends along the way
But we’ll be together yet

People say you get a crush
On every girl you meet
Whether she’s freaking hot
Or just extremely sweet

I hope I’m not just another girl
For you to use then leave
I pray to God you’re not like that
You just seem too sweet

Copyright Â© Forever_Dream ... [ 2003-06-28 20:35:00]
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Re: Mr. Wrong or Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 10:30:21 PM AEST
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good write, but unfortunately most times your friends are right.

Shari

Re: Mr. Wrong or Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 01:55:29 AM AEST
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I'LL SAY THAT FRIENDS ARE ALWAYS THERE WHEN YOU NEED THEM. GUY'S COME AND GO BUT REMEMBER THAT FRIENDS ARE ALWAYS THERE WHEN YOU NEED A HAND

Re: Mr. Wrong or Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 06:34:25 PM AEST
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True friends always guide you to the right path. It's a very good write and well expressed. Well done!
Saira

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