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Motionless in society
Contributed by
apollo
on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There are no people where I am,
they are all asleep.
All of these people had good nights,
that is why they're passed out.
Influences on the mind can affect you,
in more way then one.
You could become a statistic,
like they all have.
See what alcohol poisoning does?
It makes you very sleepy,
and now they are all quiet.
I wonder what they're dreaming about?
Copyright ©
apollo
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2003-06-28 19:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Motionless in society
(User Rating: 1 ) by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:35:24 PM AEST (User
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this was good...i liked it a lot... |
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Re: Motionless in society
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 02:05:32 PM AEST (User
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awww, they are probably not dreaming of anything... thats sad... far within' their minds.. much love and hugs, nessa |
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Re: Motionless in society
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:48:08 PM AEST (User
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They are probably dreaming of a way to overcome their alcoholism...and it's only there in their dreams. Sad to say.
Nicely done!
angel always....godspeed..joni |
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