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little baby
Contributed by
tinka_belle
on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Little baby
Ur so pretty
Little baby
Ur so cute
Little baby
Ur so special
Little baby
Ur so tiny
Little baby
Ur so small
Little baby
Ur so wonderful
Little baby
Ur so cold
Little baby
Ur so tired
Little baby
Ur so hot
Little baby
Ur so silent
Little baby
Ur so blue
Little baby
Ur so cuddly
Little baby
Ur so scared
Little baby
Ur so little
Little baby
Ur so amazing
Little baby
Ur so soft
Little baby
Ur so delicate
Little baby
Ur so fine
Little baby
Ur so adorable
Little baby
Ur so alone
Little baby
Ur so lovable
Little baby
Ur so great
Little baby
Ur so unique
Little baby
Ur so quiet
Little baby
Ur so still
Little baby
Im so worried
Little baby
Im so shy
Little baby
Im so helpless
Little baby
Im so cold
Little baby
Im so hungry
Little baby
Im so tired
Little baby
Im so small
Little baby
Im so alone
Little baby
Im so frightened
Little baby
Im so confused
Little baby
Im so awful
Little baby
Im so breakable
Little baby
Im so willing
Little baby
Im so happy
Little baby
Im so hard
Little baby
Im so frustrated
Little baby
Im so detached
Little baby
Im so anxious
Little baby
Im so scared
Little baby
Im so quiet
Little baby
Im so ashamed
Little baby
Im so blameable
Little baby
Im so distant
Little baby
Im so worn
Little baby
Im so sorry
Little baby
Ur so sick
Little baby
Ur so blue
Little baby
Ur so hungry
Little baby
Ur so still
Little baby
Ur so timid
Little baby
Ur so small
Little baby
Ur so soundless
Little baby
Ur so tired
Little baby
Ur so cold
Little baby
Ur so silly
Little baby
Ur so red
Little baby
Ur so helpless
Little baby
Ur so sad
Little baby
Ur so impossible
Little baby
Ur so young
Little baby
Ur so sleepy
Little baby
Ur so still
Little baby
Ur so dainty
Little baby
Ur so guilty
Little baby
Ur so silent
Little baby
Ur so calm
Little baby
Ur so pretty
Little baby
Ur so motionless
Little baby
Ur so angelic
Little baby
Ur so dead
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Re: little baby
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 01:33:40 PM AEST
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I like the way your poem's constructed..
Yet, I hate to see anyone die...
Thus, I have mixed emotions
Do I praise or do I cry?
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Re: little baby
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by ArdRi79 on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 05:43:13 AM AEST
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| I like the layout aswell, it is really different, but i cant figure out what it is about, What is it about, anyone? |
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Re: little baby
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:07:13 AM AEST
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| Well, this is the first of yours I've read since you pm'd me.... and I must say, the repetativeness of "little baby" left a lasting impression in my head. An impression that you were just a young child when it was took from you. Innocence. I feel your terror, pain, discomfort,confusion, your guilt from the way you were made to feel, all throughout the poem... it didn't let up, and that's a good thing. What is this poem about? Some poeple have no clue... I am sorry you have experianced this. You asked how can you write... write to leave an impression. Never hold back your right to free speech. You have done well here... I have left impressed. |
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