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She was easy to hold, so small and yet unafraid
I watched her sleep, such a peaceful angel
Her life's path yet untold
She turned sixteen on the 17th of June
She once was a sweet budding rose
Now she has turned into a beautiful bloom
Her hurt and pain used to be so easy to fix
With a loving word and a little kiss
Now it's much harder, It's now her heart involved
I miss my baby girl
But, I love the young woman now facing the world
I hope she finds HER Phantom on the very first try
I never want to see her in pain, her heart torn and tried
I don't want her to cry the same tears that I've cried
I know I can't shield her from all that will hurt
It all comes too soon I was willing to wait
She turned sixteen on the 17th of June [comments] => 7 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 23 [informant] => PhantomsLDY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

She Is Now Sixteen

Contributed by PhantomsLDY on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

It seems like only yesterday
She was easy to hold, so small and yet unafraid
I watched her sleep, such a peaceful angel
Her life's path yet untold
She turned sixteen on the 17th of June
She once was a sweet budding rose
Now she has turned into a beautiful bloom
Her hurt and pain used to be so easy to fix
With a loving word and a little kiss
Now it's much harder, It's now her heart involved
I miss my baby girl
But, I love the young woman now facing the world
I hope she finds HER Phantom on the very first try
I never want to see her in pain, her heart torn and tried
I don't want her to cry the same tears that I've cried
I know I can't shield her from all that will hurt
It all comes too soon I was willing to wait
She turned sixteen on the 17th of June

Copyright © PhantomsLDY ... [ 2003-06-26 18:05:00]
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 06:13:49 PM AEST
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a beautiful write
Shari

Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
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Aww this is so amazing, she is really lucky to have a mother like you. And from another 16 year old...when things do get tough, it is really good to know that you have your mother there to back you up and believe me, things will get tough, but with a mothers love, it is easier to get through the problems. Great write ^_^
luv stacey

Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 02:39:42 AM AEST
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A lovely poem.. venkat

Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:42:15 AM AEST
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wow! this is so sweet! my mara will be 17 in august and your right time flys lol, seems like just yesterday they were babies doesnt it?? very lovely poem, happy birthday to your baby girl from me:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:45:09 AM AEST
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Masterful writing my love, It touched me, I'm so glad I was there to see it, simplely beauitiful.

The Phantom

Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 03:52:11 PM AEST
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This is beautiful poem of your daughter. She seems like she has alot in life to go. She has a good mom that has her head on right. Some people I know don't.

Re: She Is Now Sixteen (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:07:52 PM AEST
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A mother's love for her child is such a beautiful thing. Great write!!

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