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Array ( [sid] => 19591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => lOVE IS JUST SO [time] => 2003-06-26 10:05:00 [hometext] => I hope you all enyoy this please tell me what you think. [bodytext] => I saw her passing by me
Missunderstanding reallity
Mistaking lonelliness
Currupting my identity

Can I kiss you goodbye
Could I make you fly
Could I change what I thought it was mines
Could I change

LOve is just so cruel
Its amazing but is true
Its killing me and I am not in the moon
Look at my hands what do you see

A heart desperate for our touch
A heart desperate for you seing
A million toughts for ever
cossuming my identity

You made me fly
I kiss the pain away goodbye
Its too bad that you are not mines
cause I understand everything
Including when you said goobye

LOVE IS JUST SO CRUEL
IT'S AMAZING BUT IS TRUE
ITS KILLING ME BUT I AM NOT IN THE MOON
LOOK AT MY HANDS WHAT WOULD YOU SEE... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Arimora [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

lOVE IS JUST SO

Contributed by Arimora on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I saw her passing by me
Missunderstanding reallity
Mistaking lonelliness
Currupting my identity

Can I kiss you goodbye
Could I make you fly
Could I change what I thought it was mines
Could I change

LOve is just so cruel
Its amazing but is true
Its killing me and I am not in the moon
Look at my hands what do you see

A heart desperate for our touch
A heart desperate for you seing
A million toughts for ever
cossuming my identity

You made me fly
I kiss the pain away goodbye
Its too bad that you are not mines
cause I understand everything
Including when you said goobye

LOVE IS JUST SO CRUEL
IT'S AMAZING BUT IS TRUE
ITS KILLING ME BUT I AM NOT IN THE MOON
LOOK AT MY HANDS WHAT WOULD YOU SEE...

Copyright © Arimora ... [ 2003-06-26 10:05:00]
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Re: lOVE IS JUST SO (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 12:45:58 PM AEST
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" empty handed and the Moon may mean
love unfulfilled?".
The poem depicts the feeling of falling in love
without getting satisfactory feedback,
some call this passing infactuation.

Re: lOVE IS JUST SO (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 09:38:53 AM AEST
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Yes love can be so crule as well as something we all wish for.....well written,,

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