Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 19:31:31 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 19587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Swirling Nightmare [time] => 2003-06-26 07:25:00 [hometext] => I hope you like this poem, it was a real dream I had felt. [bodytext] => This dream I had or so it seemed,
it was rather frightening.
The doctor could not prescribe a medicine,
to curb my fear of this hell I had witnessed.
What was with all the lights and colors?
Different identifications were very peculiar.
It seems as if though,
I had this happen before.
The sensations I felt, while trying to refocus,
brought images of that of a rather colorful drink.
Stretches of the imagination were obvious,
and that frightened me rather severely.
What do you call a dream that does not end?
Where a continuous moment of fiery and agony,
burns deep within, as you struggle to free yourself.
This is no dream my doctor told me,
because he was not actually my doctor, nevertheless human form.
He was a gaping hole inside my mind.
That hold surrounds my brain like cancer,
causing my body to suffer and fall asleep.
He was right, this was not a dream,
rather my everyday reality from beneath.
Never again can I escape. . . [comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 13 [informant] => apollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Swirling Nightmare

Contributed by apollo on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 07:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This dream I had or so it seemed,
it was rather frightening.
The doctor could not prescribe a medicine,
to curb my fear of this hell I had witnessed.
What was with all the lights and colors?
Different identifications were very peculiar.
It seems as if though,
I had this happen before.
The sensations I felt, while trying to refocus,
brought images of that of a rather colorful drink.
Stretches of the imagination were obvious,
and that frightened me rather severely.
What do you call a dream that does not end?
Where a continuous moment of fiery and agony,
burns deep within, as you struggle to free yourself.
This is no dream my doctor told me,
because he was not actually my doctor, nevertheless human form.
He was a gaping hole inside my mind.
That hold surrounds my brain like cancer,
causing my body to suffer and fall asleep.
He was right, this was not a dream,
rather my everyday reality from beneath.
Never again can I escape. . .

Copyright © apollo ... [ 2003-06-26 07:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Swirling Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by docblood on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 11:12:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

You say that this was something you felt while you were asleep. I've had the same experiences before myself, and I know how hard it is to put it in writing. Good job, and keep on writing!

Re: Swirling Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 12:54:14 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sounds like you had a psychotic episode.
What you are writing about is very deep
check my poem ' Lucid dreamer'.

Re: Swirling Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 09:53:02 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

A mysterious poem, excellent flow to it, keep it up I look forward to reading more.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com