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Array ( [sid] => 1958 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without You [time] => 2002-08-08 07:00:26 [hometext] => o' the loneliness of lost love. [bodytext] => I looked out my window, on a cold snowy day,
counting the moments since you went away.
I keep wondering how long, I’ll feel like this inside,
as I keep wiping the tears from my eyes.
I never knew what I was letting go,
till the loneliness without you, continued to grow.
The light in my eyes has all but since gone.
as I wonder how long I can continue to hold on.
It was a night like this, on a cold winter's day,
I watched you walk out, and I didn’t ask you to stay.
Our problems weren’t few, and our emotions were high,
as we decided it was time, for us to say goodbye.
I can still see you walking out that door,
As I remember my heart sinking to the floor.
What a fool we were, giving up so fast,
without giving our love a chance to last.
Now I struggle for self control to maintain,
as I look out the window, and the snow turns to rain.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 430 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Jeff_Scott_Morehead [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 111 [ratings] => 23 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Without You

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 07:00:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I looked out my window, on a cold snowy day,
counting the moments since you went away.
I keep wondering how long, I’ll feel like this inside,
as I keep wiping the tears from my eyes.
I never knew what I was letting go,
till the loneliness without you, continued to grow.
The light in my eyes has all but since gone.
as I wonder how long I can continue to hold on.
It was a night like this, on a cold winter's day,
I watched you walk out, and I didn’t ask you to stay.
Our problems weren’t few, and our emotions were high,
as we decided it was time, for us to say goodbye.
I can still see you walking out that door,
As I remember my heart sinking to the floor.
What a fool we were, giving up so fast,
without giving our love a chance to last.
Now I struggle for self control to maintain,
as I look out the window, and the snow turns to rain.

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2002-08-08 07:00:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 07:10:02 AM AEST
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Wow!! This shows so much emotion!! I am enjoying your poems very much.. and relating to them.. Thank you for sharing this..
Jenni

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_hummingbird on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 09:49:36 AM AEST
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This was so very well wrote. I think we have all been through these emotions at one time or another. Well done. great write.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by angelsrborn on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 05:12:08 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem! can i put it into my poem book that im making?

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 11:17:41 PM AEST
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yes, you can, I would be honered.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:45:05 AM AEST
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Wow. That's a great poem. I love the way it was written.

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