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about a well
where innocent souls
wander and dwell
Locked in darkness
forever they'll stay
hidden inside
never to get away
Trying to escape
trying to get out
Yelling for help
they scream and shout
Shattered and lost
In the darkness they dwell
trying to escape
from the the soul taking well
trying to get away
but they're souls
remain there to stay
in the well of souls
never to get away.
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Well of souls

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A story I once heard
about a well
where innocent souls
wander and dwell
Locked in darkness
forever they'll stay
hidden inside
never to get away
Trying to escape
trying to get out
Yelling for help
they scream and shout
Shattered and lost
In the darkness they dwell
trying to escape
from the the soul taking well
trying to get away
but they're souls
remain there to stay
in the well of souls
never to get away.

Copyright © youngpoet1989 ... [ 2003-06-25 19:25:00]
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Re: Well of souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 07:54:33 PM AEST
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interesting write well done
Shari

Re: Well of souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 08:13:08 PM AEST
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This was a great idea for a poem! ( wish I had thought of it ) lol Well done! :o)
Larry

Re: Well of souls (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 11:26:56 AM AEST
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this is really good, and the repetition in it works really well. It gave me the impression of the souls all tumbling and falling into the well.. maybe that's just me...
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