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The boredom eats at me like a starving parasite
Discontent, pacing, head racing
Body ready to go into battle
The boredom drives me mad
Leaving me mad, angry and alone
Feeling worthless
I count the minutes as they slowly drag by
Where am I going
What am I going to do
I need to go somewhere
For my soul does not rest here
Anymore
Shaking back and forth
For I can not sit still
No where to go and nothing to do
There is plenty to do
But the discontent
Drives me mad
Nothing is filling the void
I have so much I want to scream to the world
But not yet have I spoken the words
The mental state my mind rests in…
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Silent_Rain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Disorder

Contributed by Silent_Rain on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My disorder

The boredom eats at me like a starving parasite
Discontent, pacing, head racing
Body ready to go into battle
The boredom drives me mad
Leaving me mad, angry and alone
Feeling worthless
I count the minutes as they slowly drag by
Where am I going
What am I going to do
I need to go somewhere
For my soul does not rest here
Anymore
Shaking back and forth
For I can not sit still
No where to go and nothing to do
There is plenty to do
But the discontent
Drives me mad
Nothing is filling the void
I have so much I want to scream to the world
But not yet have I spoken the words
The mental state my mind rests in…

Copyright Â© Silent_Rain ... [ 2003-06-23 16:45:00]
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Re: My Disorder (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 04:53:40 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.. I hope this is a temporary state of mind...
Jenni

Re: My Disorder (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 05:47:55 PM AEST
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i could relate to this. that feeling where you're tired and weary of everything - emotional lethargy, totally soul destroying. but it is a temporary feeling, i promise. i like the simplicity and raw emotion in this write. welcome to YPDC, check out some of my poems if you like, Kate x

Re: My Disorder (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 08:08:31 PM AEST
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Welcome, this is a very good write, a lot of us here can relate to your poem, but somehow this helps so much
Shari

Re: My Disorder (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:58:39 PM AEST
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ahhh, write it out my friend, you are very worthy albeit a bit bored, as time flies on, you will wonder where it has gone... i now sit and the hours dont seem as long... hang in there and welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love to you, nessa

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