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[aid] => mick
[title] => cognizant realm
[time] => 2003-06-22 08:05:00
[hometext] => ~:*written under an oak tree whilst a squirrel visited me*:~
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she sat and meditated, on the earth......
and of the whole earth, of man, stars and birth,
transending in to her consciousness and heart
humble poetess finding pathways to her mystic art,
finding a reason for it all, and thus the poems fire
that man himself must the utmost wonderous desire,
quiet peace and birdsong filled her ears and soul
hush now, beauty softly sleeps deeply within' the whole,
she could now justify honestly what she had then begun
her thoughts about the actions of the sky, moon and sun,
narration of her mind, to heart, in whispers harmony
of all the wonderous creatures, surely man, it must be he,
her face looks out to all the vast canvases of this life
faire as moon, strength of sun, sorrows dim as hope is bright,
fill the spring of your soul with waterfalls imaginings
let trickling river become raging soul filled sea of dreams,
and mountain peaks reach for the sky in unending time
enclosed in mists and clouds, sun streaked in beauty's rhyme,
a spirit from this heart bursts forth to sing and shine
like nature's quiet music earth's heart is thine.
´°*ø,¸¸|||,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸|||¸,ø*°´
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°||||°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°
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cognizant realm
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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she sat and meditated, on the earth......
and of the whole earth, of man, stars and birth,
transending in to her consciousness and heart
humble poetess finding pathways to her mystic art,
finding a reason for it all, and thus the poems fire
that man himself must the utmost wonderous desire,
quiet peace and birdsong filled her ears and soul
hush now, beauty softly sleeps deeply within' the whole,
she could now justify honestly what she had then begun
her thoughts about the actions of the sky, moon and sun,
narration of her mind, to heart, in whispers harmony
of all the wonderous creatures, surely man, it must be he,
her face looks out to all the vast canvases of this life
faire as moon, strength of sun, sorrows dim as hope is bright,
fill the spring of your soul with waterfalls imaginings
let trickling river become raging soul filled sea of dreams,
and mountain peaks reach for the sky in unending time
enclosed in mists and clouds, sun streaked in beauty's rhyme,
a spirit from this heart bursts forth to sing and shine
like nature's quiet music earth's heart is thine.
´°*ø,¸¸|||,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸|||¸,ø*°´
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°||||°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-06-22 08:05:00]
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Re: cognizant realm
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:23:20 AM AEST
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| This is magnificent Nessa.....Oh if I could sit with you for but a while...even in the silence, your soul would inspire and enrich...wow!!! *reading again*... :) |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 09:26:17 AM AEST
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Nessa this is so beautiful, all i and so many others need is to be near you, for the inspiration shines so brightly from your soul so pure!
- Becca |
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by Jessica_Saini on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:20:01 PM AEST
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How very beautiful. It has lifted my spirits. Thank you.
~Jessica |
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:41:46 PM AEST
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This was manificent my dear friend so inspiring, I loved it
Shari |
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by shelby on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 02:21:48 PM AEST
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Nessa my friend this is beautiful!
Michelle |
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Re: cognizant realm
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 07:37:55 PM AEST
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| Your best poem by far ... wonderfully written ... nice images ... Jan |
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Re: cognizant realm
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 09:46:43 PM AEST
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Ness....this is so beautiful.... you are such an inspiration...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: cognizant realm
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 03:47:57 AM AEST
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| well written.. lost in the quiet music of nature. venkat |
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 11:53:06 AM AEST
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Both you and Jan have this magic ability to suspend time and space for the mind to roam.
It takes me back to a time when we spent many hours on "stand by" at our dispersal
on the edge of the airfield miles from anywhere. I used to lay in the grass and drift, just as you describe, no....exactly as you describe.
Thank you, thank you, for taking me back to probably the most intense time in my life.
That....was living! |
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Re: cognizant realm
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by princesspurty on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 07:31:48 PM AEST
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| truth behold in beauty from thy great creator, for this is what you have done in the most perfect and gifted way, beautiful! |
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 07:02:15 PM AEST
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| Both inspirational and humbling in it'sbeauty- Awesome write maam.--Russ |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 02:03:45 PM AEST
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| wow...nessa...this is absolutely stunning...beautiful... |
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Re: cognizant realm
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by Bongo on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 10:33:54 AM AEST
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Your mind is at ease
The message a breeze
Ness, Let there be more squirrels. |
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:16:32 PM AEST
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| hte beauty of nature, delicate, tender and so full of serenity, I keeping this moment you took me too!!! , really brought a sense of peace, thank you , hugs and loves, Val |
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 01:59:50 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful nessa... i just finished reading a poem here that literally had in me in tears of sadness... i thank the gods i read your poem next, for it filled my heart with gladness... you write of times i have felt deep within when one with nature... this is so visually stimulating, i can see this peaceful place through your words... thank you and blessings... michele |
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