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Array ( [sid] => 19414 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Incomplete without him [time] => 2003-06-21 23:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My life is incomplete
without you here
I love you so
but now you're gone
I was too late
You died right before my eyes
And now I visit your grave each day
telling you how much I cared about you
and how I loved you so much
I cry every night thinking about you
I even have dreams about you
that I wish could be reality
My life is incomplete without him
I lost him and now he's gone.

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Incomplete without him

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My life is incomplete
without you here
I love you so
but now you're gone
I was too late
You died right before my eyes
And now I visit your grave each day
telling you how much I cared about you
and how I loved you so much
I cry every night thinking about you
I even have dreams about you
that I wish could be reality
My life is incomplete without him
I lost him and now he's gone.

Copyright © youngpoet1989 ... [ 2003-06-21 23:05:00]
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Re: Incomplete without him (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:12:59 AM AEST
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Your poem is heartbreaking. Is this really something you are living with now? If you need someone to talk to email me. My heart goes out to you.

Re: Incomplete without him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 07:49:29 AM AEST
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This is so very sad. I am so sorry for your loss. If you need to talk msg me, I havent been thru this but my sister has and I have comforted her thru her sleepless nights. A great but heartbreaking poem. Luv always, Stacey

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