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Array ( [sid] => 19399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Child of Grace [time] => 2003-06-21 15:35:00 [hometext] => I don't know if the name will make much sense with this poem, but i couldn't think of a title, but i really like this poem, please read it. [bodytext] => Please stop the banging daddy
You know I can’t let you in
Stop rattling the door daddy
I’m sorry I made you mad again
Please leave me alone daddy
You don’t know what I’m going through
I’m trying to block out the sound daddy
But I can’t, I don’t know what to do.
I know you’re angry at me daddy
But can’t we talk it out?
Why do you have to punish me daddy
Physically, and then shout?
I must be a really bad child, daddy
To make you say the things you say
I really don’t know what I did daddy
To make you hit and push me this way.
I hate having to hide daddy
I hate hearing you scream
I try not to love you daddy
But I always have this dream
That some day you’ll see, daddy
What you’re doing to me
That some day, daddy, you’ll realize
What a true family is supposed to be
I’m trying to hate you daddy
With what you do, I shouldn’t have to try
But I’m your little girl, and you’re my daddy
And I’ll love you until the day I die.
I’m trying to tell you this daddy
But you can’t hear me through your yells
I pray to God to have mercy on you, daddy
When you die, I don’t want you to go to hell.
I’m so sorry I made you mad, daddy
I promise I won’t do it again.
Oh no, daddy, don’t pick the lock
Please don’t come in.
I don’t want to die yet daddy
I’m just a little girl
I’m starting to see a little funny, daddy
Everything’s becoming a blur.
I feel my head hit the wall
I feel blood run down my back
I spoke a few last words to daddy
Before everything went black
I said I love you very much daddy
And I’m sorry you never knew that. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => BlackFire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Child of Grace

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Please stop the banging daddy
You know I can’t let you in
Stop rattling the door daddy
I’m sorry I made you mad again
Please leave me alone daddy
You don’t know what I’m going through
I’m trying to block out the sound daddy
But I can’t, I don’t know what to do.
I know you’re angry at me daddy
But can’t we talk it out?
Why do you have to punish me daddy
Physically, and then shout?
I must be a really bad child, daddy
To make you say the things you say
I really don’t know what I did daddy
To make you hit and push me this way.
I hate having to hide daddy
I hate hearing you scream
I try not to love you daddy
But I always have this dream
That some day you’ll see, daddy
What you’re doing to me
That some day, daddy, you’ll realize
What a true family is supposed to be
I’m trying to hate you daddy
With what you do, I shouldn’t have to try
But I’m your little girl, and you’re my daddy
And I’ll love you until the day I die.
I’m trying to tell you this daddy
But you can’t hear me through your yells
I pray to God to have mercy on you, daddy
When you die, I don’t want you to go to hell.
I’m so sorry I made you mad, daddy
I promise I won’t do it again.
Oh no, daddy, don’t pick the lock
Please don’t come in.
I don’t want to die yet daddy
I’m just a little girl
I’m starting to see a little funny, daddy
Everything’s becoming a blur.
I feel my head hit the wall
I feel blood run down my back
I spoke a few last words to daddy
Before everything went black
I said I love you very much daddy
And I’m sorry you never knew that.




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Re: Child of Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:06:32 PM AEST
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It hurts to read this poem..it is powerful


Re: Child of Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:55:04 PM AEST
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Very strong write,, you feel the childs innocense,, the longing for love from an abusive parent,, this brought back some painful memories,, but the problem needs to be addressed.
Shari


Re: Child of Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:08:53 AM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes. A beautiful write and I do agree that this is a problem that needs to be addressed and not just soon, now.


Re: Child of Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:15:33 AM AEST
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all to real lisa...all to real...*sigh*

Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~




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