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[aid] => Mick
[title] => A Note Goodbye
[time] => 2003-06-21 10:35:00
[hometext] => This poem was written at a point in time where I didn't want to live, kind of a fantasy of suicide.
[bodytext] => Just sit still for a minute or two my dear I've got a sad story for your ears to hear Of a girl the world ignored Of all the pain that she had stored A girl so sweet, A girl so kind A girl who was slightly out of her mind She felt alone, and that no one could care About her problems and life so unfair So she kept it all inside She never let them no when she cried She never spoke of the times she almost died A secret she never revealed, to me or to you, Was that her mom beat her til she was black and blue Another problem she kept out of our sight Was that she cut herself almost every night She never told how she lacked to dream She never revealed her lack of self esteem She didn't say much of anything to anyone She never told a soul about the gun The rifle she hid under her bed The gun she'd use to shoot herself dead Then one night it was all to much to take She told everyone her hurt, she put her life at stake They all laughed in her face, told her she was a disgrace And to get the hell out of this place She told them her pain, How she was insane They told her to leave, she had nothing to gain She told them how at her flesh she would tear And not one of them showed her that they would care So she said ***** you all, I'm leaving, goodbye She ran to her bed, ready to die Pulled the gun out, from beneath her bed With one final breath, shot herself dead Are you crying now? Do you feel bad? Do you wish you'd have known she was so sad? Well you should have known what to do Because this is my suicide note to you. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TeenageEmoGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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