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It has no end, it has no stop
As the wind blows in my face
I scream at the fear
That my heart tastes
I fear the terror,
But not much longer
For I see the tunnel
Leading to heaven yonder
My heart is tired, beaten, worn
It has been weathered, scarred and torn
I see the end, coming near
I feel the fading of my fear
I'm going now, Please don’t cry
My fear is healed, and so am I.
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Healed

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

This battle brews in my heart
It has no end, it has no stop
As the wind blows in my face
I scream at the fear
That my heart tastes
I fear the terror,
But not much longer
For I see the tunnel
Leading to heaven yonder
My heart is tired, beaten, worn
It has been weathered, scarred and torn
I see the end, coming near
I feel the fading of my fear
I'm going now, Please don’t cry
My fear is healed, and so am I.

Copyright Â© BlackFire9786 ... [ 2003-06-21 07:05:00]
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Re: Healed (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:12:40 AM AEST
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you wrote this at 10??.... that's pretty deep for a 10 year old... great write, much better than my first I can tell you that much. :)

Re: Healed (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:31:52 AM AEST
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Your talent showed strong even then, glad you stuck around to write more, for it would be sad to waste such a gift
Shari

Re: Healed (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:08:02 AM AEST
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i remember the day you wrote this...you came running into my room and asked me to read it...then i wrote a poem and that's how all this maddness started! lol...i love it. take care sis.

Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~

Re: Healed (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:48:53 PM AEST
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I have been reading a few of your poems and your a really good writer. I can't get over it. How old are you?
Keep up the excellent writing
Hiddendarkness1705

Re: Healed (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:36:44 PM AEST
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thank you for the compliment, :D i'm 15 years old, so i wrote this one about 5 years ago.

Re: Healed (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 04:37:23 AM AEST
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Totally amazing for a ten year old. A wonderful talent indeed. So much wisdom for one so young.Excellent

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