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With ever so passion, this is what you said to me.
Whispered love, promised to be back soon,
Sweetly kissed away the tears on that sad noon.

Spent my nights, dreaming of you,
Spent my days, waiting for you.
Wandered on a lonely shore,
My love got intense more and more.

Then the day came, you stood before me,
Cold and distant, you looked at me,
Avowed, ‘ I’m sorry, things have got changed,
Found a new love, nothing can be same.’

My smile faded away, felt benumbed,
Black clouds covered the shinning sun.
Wanted to vent my spleen on you,
Instead, said my good-byes to you.

Dazed with disbelief, watched you leaving,
The first bloom of love crushed, heart’s weeping.
‘You’re for me and I’m for you, our love for eternity’
Echoed in my mind, threw me into insanity.
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You And Me

Contributed by Saira on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

‘You’re for me and I’m for you, our love for eternity’
With ever so passion, this is what you said to me.
Whispered love, promised to be back soon,
Sweetly kissed away the tears on that sad noon.

Spent my nights, dreaming of you,
Spent my days, waiting for you.
Wandered on a lonely shore,
My love got intense more and more.

Then the day came, you stood before me,
Cold and distant, you looked at me,
Avowed, ‘ I’m sorry, things have got changed,
Found a new love, nothing can be same.’

My smile faded away, felt benumbed,
Black clouds covered the shinning sun.
Wanted to vent my spleen on you,
Instead, said my good-byes to you.

Dazed with disbelief, watched you leaving,
The first bloom of love crushed, heart’s weeping.
‘You’re for me and I’m for you, our love for eternity’
Echoed in my mind, threw me into insanity.

Copyright Â© Saira ... [ 2003-06-20 12:35:00]
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Re: You And Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 05:01:56 PM AEST
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Touchy touchy, i feel so sorry for u, hope u get ur love back.:P
Lovely poem keep up the good work :)
from u know who :P

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 12:57:39 AM AEST
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sad but beautiful
Shari

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 08:46:56 AM AEST
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Thanks Shari.

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 08:53:41 AM AEST
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Wow, really heart touching.. very talented write..Best of luck.. Keep them coming on
venkat

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:04:32 AM AEST
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My friends comments mean a lot to me. Thank you Venkat.

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:04:57 PM AEST
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emotional and filled with feelings ....very very nice!!!.-------nida

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 06:31:19 PM AEST
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Deception and betrayal depicted here
unfortunately is a common trait in humanity.
I suspect it is because seduction is easy
when promises are used in vain.

Re: You And Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 10:31:17 PM AEST
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True.

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