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Array ( [sid] => 19334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => So Long! [time] => 2003-06-20 10:35:00 [hometext] => Taking a trip out of here from this rain!
Need sun! I'm wilting!!!!!!!!!
See ya guys again soon! [bodytext] => So Long, Good bye,
Its time I go,
You ask why,
I'll tell you so,
I'm going on a trip,
far away from here,
I'm loosing my grip,
on life so I fear,
I'll be gone for days,
I cant take this much more,
I just need to get away,
maybe to the sunny shores,
I 'll be looking for the sun,
For I know its out there,
I need to find the fun,
because its not here,
So I'll see you all very soon,
but now I must go away,
following that bright full moon,
I'll see you again some day!
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 52 [informant] => lowman613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
So Long!

Contributed by lowman613 on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



So Long, Good bye,
Its time I go,
You ask why,
I'll tell you so,
I'm going on a trip,
far away from here,
I'm loosing my grip,
on life so I fear,
I'll be gone for days,
I cant take this much more,
I just need to get away,
maybe to the sunny shores,
I 'll be looking for the sun,
For I know its out there,
I need to find the fun,
because its not here,
So I'll see you all very soon,
but now I must go away,
following that bright full moon,
I'll see you again some day!




Copyright © lowman613 ... [ 2003-06-20 10:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:42:38 AM AEST
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Have a great trip and get yourself a great suntan Christina!!
Michelle


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:48:19 AM AEST
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Awww Christina,I know what you mean.
My mother is on the east coast and has had rain 40days out of 50! She feels the same way!!! I hope you get a nice relaxing time in the sun if you can find it these days!
Enjoy and don't forget to pen some poetry
while you're away! {{{christina}}}
Have a safe journey my friend...godspeed!
joni


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:58:37 AM AEST
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Have a great trip Christina but don't stay away too long.

sleepless_siren


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 11:26:06 PM AEST
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enjoy your trip we will be thinking of you
Shari


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:19:23 AM AEST
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Beautiful rendering..enjoy sunny shores..best of luck christina.. venkat


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:07:09 PM AEST
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Have a jovial time Christina! You'll be missed a lot.


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:45:44 PM AEST
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have fun!! much love to you and yours, hey hey hurry back we'll miss you but soak up bunches of rays first! ha! nessa


Re: So Long! (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 07:38:58 PM AEST
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:S
Another friend gone from the site.
I hope to hear from you really soon Christina.
I come back and you're gone.
LOL JK
Hope to see you soon my friend.
*S* Cynthia




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